Life

Descended From Darkness · Sep 28, 2007, 04:43 PM

Life is full of mysteries
Life is full of wonders
Life is full of agony
Life is full of danger

We live to experience these things
We live for the thrills
We live for the excitement,
the anticipation that the future
will eventually bring us

And there are those who take
life into their own hands
and waste the future
that has yet to come.

cantsenditback · Sep 28, 2007, 09:59 PM

cool your poem does describe life so perfectely and there will be losses in life

*RayMe* · Sep 29, 2007, 01:26 AM

Hmm...not fully..

but it is what life is abt ^^ an adventure..

Hmm... ^^ good poem Rai... but the words are repeated many times.. :/

and kinda short a bit for a poem abt life.. life is more than that to me ^^

Astaroth · Oct 01, 2007, 07:39 AM

Great job!!!!!
Love the words since they are full of meaning!!!!

Sep 28, 2007, 04:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
Descended From Darkness Jigoku Shoujo Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: somewhere far far away from here. Posts: 505 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 9,881	Life Life is full of mysteries Life is full of wonders Life is full of agony Life is full of danger We live to experience these things We live for the thrills We live for the excitement, the anticipation that the future will eventually bring us And there are those who take life into their own hands and waste the future that has yet to come. __________________ Thanx zyta for the awesome set [ Rai's Gallery: Rai's myspace : Rai's Deviantart: Angelic Ruin:SpiritDetective
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cantsenditback byakugan Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: France, Scotland, Ireland, Malaysia Posts: 603 Thanks: 4 Thanked 27 Times in 26 Posts Credits: 12,107	Re: Life cool your poem does describe life so perfectely and there will be losses in life
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: Life Hmm...not fully.. but it is what life is abt ^^ an adventure.. Hmm... ^^ good poem Rai... but the words are repeated many times.. :/ and kinda short a bit for a poem abt life.. life is more than that to me ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Astaroth Chtonian Slayer Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know Posts: 562 Thanks: 23 Thanked 47 Times in 45 Posts Credits: 31,396	Re: Life Great job!!!!! Love the words since they are full of meaning!!!! __________________ DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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