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Old Oct 13, 2007, 06:48 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Life

life is full of love and hope
in some cases dispair and doubt
emotion that cant not be avoided
cries that will not be understood
smiles and joy in the faces of all
excet the one of your own
friends and family can not help
only you can help yourself
passion and yern for love
clinging to your friends not wanting them
to leave and depart
letting go of old memories
making mistakes
making new friends
trying to hold on to the good of life
whats left for you when all is lost...?
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Old Oct 13, 2007, 06:56 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Life

your poem is really good^^ i especially liked "trying to hold on to the good of life
whats left for you when all is lost...?" keep up the good work =]
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Old Oct 14, 2007, 05:15 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I agree with Blackrose there... nicely done... ^^ but theres a few spelling mistakes in there and grammatical errors.. hmm... but overall the poem is very good ^^
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