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    Otaku sasukesgirl is off to a good start
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    Life

    life is full of love and hope
    in some cases dispair and doubt
    emotion that cant not be avoided
    cries that will not be understood
    smiles and joy in the faces of all
    excet the one of your own
    friends and family can not help
    only you can help yourself
    passion and yern for love
    clinging to your friends not wanting them
    to leave and depart
    letting go of old memories
    making mistakes
    making new friends
    trying to hold on to the good of life
    whats left for you when all is lost...?

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    Re: Life

    your poem is really good^^ i especially liked "trying to hold on to the good of life
    whats left for you when all is lost...?" keep up the good work =]
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    Re: Life

    I agree with Blackrose there... nicely done... ^^ but theres a few spelling mistakes in there and grammatical errors.. hmm... but overall the poem is very good ^^

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