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    How many days are left

    Till I'm put to rest?

    How many more sun sets will it take for me

    To see that I'm blessed?

    How many mourners will come

    To my grave a day?

    Or if I do get shot

    will I lay to stay?

    In my final moments will

    I forgive myself for all the mistakes I made?

    When I take my last breath

    will thoughs who hate my face

    Bless my family or remain that way?

    But I think it's safe to say

    That I have no enemies

    And that ain't gone change



    Many blessings I had

    Many questions I asked

    I never learned alot

    Cause many lessons are bad but I did

    Learn that many people are evil

    When they try to teach you

    They'll straight up mislead you they'll listen to what

    your saying and act like they believe you

    I like you, it's no secret

    But watching you smile from a distance is where I'll keep it.
    Your life means nothing to me.

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    Re: Life

    Hmm... you talk about if you will be remembered if you die someday... and in the end...you mentioned of some one you like... my...nicely done...

    Really like the way the poem goes... ^^ and whats said in the poem really is true..

    I see a good poet there.. and i hope to see more of your works ^^

    Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!!
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    Smile Re: Life

    Yep,

    I agree with you Ray, The poem is really well done!

    The beginning was great ^_^ It began great and It did sound as if your counting your days until you die.

    How many days are left

    Till I'm put to rest?

    How many more sun sets will it take for me

    To see that I'm blessed?

    This line was really well thought of (My Opinion).
    How many more sun sets will it take for me

    To see that I'm blessed?
    Awesome!

    ^_^

    -Zainab

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