Life is...

*atomik_sprout* · Nov 05, 2007, 02:20 PM

**My random thoughts on life**

Sometimes life is
like a pro wrestler...

You feel good about how
things are goin' in the fight,
the crowd is cheering for you,
your adrenaline is pumping...

Then, BAM!!! Life just suprised
you with a drop-kick that'll leave
bruises on your children's children!!

But other times,
life is like a good bowl of ramen...

In my opinion, everybody
needs to get one (present company aside)...
Y'know, the people who do nothing
but play WoW all day? When is the last time
you seen someone face to face, buddy?

Then there are the times
when life is like a good video game...

It just becomes so great that
you refuse to quit, you refuse to
give up and you refuse to give in!
It becomes your new addiction and
you are driven to make the most of it.

But, we all know that wrestling comes
television three times a week...

Astaroth · Nov 05, 2007, 02:23 PM

Wow.....very inspirational.......especially the words!!!!
Very nicely done!!!!

ihauntforlust · Nov 05, 2007, 02:37 PM

Quote:

But, we all know that wrestling comes
television three times a week...
__________________

I love those words, really nice xD and funny ^^

I liked how the poem flowed, Awesome job!

-x- Zainab -x-

*RayMe* · Nov 06, 2007, 06:36 AM

Quote:

Then, BAM!!! Life just suprised
you with a drop-kick that'll leave
bruises on your children's children!!

Inspirational.. and a very fresh thoughts and nice thoughts on love..i wonder what's in your head right now.. hmm..

mine is easy to know xD

keep it up man ^^ awesome indeed...creative

bratling · Nov 06, 2007, 06:43 AM

Interesting. Really different from what you normally write. I really like the wording and such. But the flow/style didn't really do it for me. But I still like the idea and thought behind it.

*atomik_sprout* · Nov 06, 2007, 07:16 AM

Thanks to all! This one really wasn't supposed to have any special meaning or anything, I just was watching wrestling (yeah, I know, right?) and I was thinking about life and had a notebook in front of me and started writing what I watched and felt. So, this is one of those weird poems of mine that I usually keep to myself. I'm glad that you all liked it! ^_^

bratling · Nov 06, 2007, 07:41 AM

I like weird. I'm proud of my weird personally.

I think writing from things you see as well as things you feel is a good place to start doing different kinds of writing. It's exciting.

*atomik_sprout* · Nov 06, 2007, 09:07 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by bratling

I like weird. I'm proud of my weird personally.

I think writing from things you see as well as things you feel is a good place to start doing different kinds of writing. It's exciting.

That it is, my friend. ^_^ I really like the idea of being inspired by mindless television, personally. LOL. I don't know how or why it happens, but it makes me happy when I get random inspiration like that.

highteckdudu · Nov 06, 2007, 10:52 AM

This one kept me reading! It was great some times I have those same feelings on life! Very interesting!

*atomik_sprout* · Nov 06, 2007, 12:19 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by highteckdudu

This one kept me reading! It was great some times I have those same feelings on life! Very interesting!

As always, thank you for your input! ^_^
I greatly appreciate it. I hope you like my future writing. I haven't been blocked in a while, but I feel one comin' on, LOL.

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atomik_sprout CHUCK NORRIS!!! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,087 Thanks: 55 Thanked 69 Times in 64 Posts Credits: 110,749	Life is... My random thoughts on life Sometimes life is like a pro wrestler... You feel good about how things are goin' in the fight, the crowd is cheering for you, your adrenaline is pumping... Then, BAM!!! Life just suprised you with a drop-kick that'll leave bruises on your children's children!! But other times, life is like a good bowl of ramen... In my opinion, everybody needs to get one (present company aside)... Y'know, the people who do nothing but play WoW all day? When is the last time you seen someone face to face, buddy? Then there are the times when life is like a good video game... It just becomes so great that you refuse to quit, you refuse to give up and you refuse to give in! It becomes your new addiction and you are driven to make the most of it. But, we all know that wrestling comes television three times a week... __________________ http://www.myspace.com/boondocksamurai
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atomik_sprout CHUCK NORRIS!!! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,087 Thanks: 55 Thanked 69 Times in 64 Posts Credits: 110,749	Re: Life is... Thanks to all! This one really wasn't supposed to have any special meaning or anything, I just was watching wrestling (yeah, I know, right?) and I was thinking about life and had a notebook in front of me and started writing what I watched and felt. So, this is one of those weird poems of mine that I usually keep to myself. I'm glad that you all liked it! ^_^ __________________ http://www.myspace.com/boondocksamurai
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