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    life

    my life is hard and full of trouble
    my life is wrought with all sorts of thunder
    even in death my troubles will follow
    my life is doomed along with those who follow
    my life comes to an end i bid farwell
    my life will change and all will die
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: life

    even in death my troubles will follow
    I found it interesting that this was the only line that didn't start with "my life...". Whether it was intentional, I'm not sure. But that shows a lot of significanse. With what seemed like an emphasis on life's troubles. That one line that stood out, displayed exactly how ones trouble can overwhelm one's sense of "my life...". And, how we take our problems with, even in death.
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    Honey, that's cool, but why did you make a poem like this?????

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    awww that's so sad.. i hope life gets better for u soon as it seems to be kinda sad within this poem.. i liked it tho it was really nice ^^

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    Re: life

    o.0 i hope things get better for you really =] ^^ just dont be sad anymore =[ be happy =]
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