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    Life is about pain and misery

    My life is about pain and misery
    I always get pick on because of my age
    I wish i was the oldest
    But then i won't live long
    Only if i met my belong one
    then life would be fun
    If only if i saw the most precious one
    i would be happier than anything
    If only if i can see my grandma
    See was the one that treated me nice
    I will always remember her
    sad that she died
    Life is about pain and misery

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    Re: Life is about pain and misery

    i think the title didnt go with the poem..
    but its nice.. so much regrets there..
    are you ok? hehe

    If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
    I don't mind and you don't matter

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    Re: Life is about pain and misery

    Quote Originally Posted by Gerky Lee View Post
    My life is about pain and misery
    I always get pick on because of my age
    I wish i was the oldest
    But then i won't live long
    1. Being the youngest has its advantages. I should know, I'm the oldest and it sucks.
    2. And it wouldn't matter if you were the youngest or oldest, you'd still die anyway.

    I can tell you are so depressed by this poem. Don't worry. Life gets better.

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    Re: Life is about pain and misery

    yeah i'm doing alrite. I always wish I had no regret.

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    Re: Life is about pain and misery

    The poems bogged down with grammatical errors and it really didn't flow well in my opinion. ^^;;

    It could be improved but it has a nice simple touch to it.
    Nice work.

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