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Reply With Quotei think the title didnt go with the poem..
but its nice.. so much regrets there..
are you ok? hehe
My life is about pain and misery
I always get pick on because of my age
I wish i was the oldest
But then i won't live long
Only if i met my belong one
then life would be fun
If only if i saw the most precious one
i would be happier than anything
If only if i can see my grandma
See was the one that treated me nice
I will always remember her
sad that she died
Life is about pain and misery
i think the title didnt go with the poem..
but its nice.. so much regrets there..
are you ok? hehe
If you don't like me, it's mind over matter.
I don't mind and you don't matter
Originally Posted by Gerky Lee
- Being the youngest has its advantages. I should know, I'm the oldest and it sucks.
- And it wouldn't matter if you were the youngest or oldest, you'd still die anyway.
I can tell you are so depressed by this poem. Don't worry. Life gets better.
yeah i'm doing alrite. I always wish I had no regret.
The poems bogged down with grammatical errors and it really didn't flow well in my opinion. ^^;;
It could be improved but it has a nice simple touch to it.
Nice work.
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