Life is about pain and misery

Gerky Lee · Apr 28, 2007, 10:47 AM

My life is about pain and misery
I always get pick on because of my age
I wish i was the oldest
But then i won't live long
Only if i met my belong one
then life would be fun
If only if i saw the most precious one
i would be happier than anything
If only if i can see my grandma
See was the one that treated me nice
I will always remember her
sad that she died
Life is about pain and misery

Lotski · Apr 29, 2007, 03:50 AM

i think the title didnt go with the poem..
but its nice.. so much regrets there..
are you ok? hehe

*The White Wolf* · Apr 29, 2007, 03:49 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Gerky Lee

My life is about pain and misery
I always get pick on because of my age
I wish i was the oldest
But then i won't live long

Being the youngest has its advantages. I should know, I'm the oldest and it sucks.
And it wouldn't matter if you were the youngest or oldest, you'd still die anyway.

I can tell you are so depressed by this poem. Don't worry. Life gets better.

Gerky Lee · Apr 30, 2007, 03:58 PM

yeah i'm doing alrite. I always wish I had no regret.

Reese · May 01, 2007, 09:57 AM

The poems bogged down with grammatical errors and it really didn't flow well in my opinion. ^^;;

It could be improved but it has a nice simple touch to it.
Nice work.

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Gerky Lee Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Sacramento Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 726	Life is about pain and misery My life is about pain and misery I always get pick on because of my age I wish i was the oldest But then i won't live long Only if i met my belong one then life would be fun If only if i saw the most precious one i would be happier than anything If only if i can see my grandma See was the one that treated me nice I will always remember her sad that she died Life is about pain and misery
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Lotski Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2007 Location: Baguio City, Philippines Posts: 150 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 358	Re: Life is about pain and misery i think the title didnt go with the poem.. but its nice.. so much regrets there.. are you ok? hehe __________________ Be d REASON for someone's happiness, NOT just part of it... Be a PART of someone's sadness, but NOT d reason for it.
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Gerky Lee Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Sacramento Posts: 102 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 726	Re: Life is about pain and misery yeah i'm doing alrite. I always wish I had no regret.
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Reese Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: "Enigma" Posts: 228 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,018	Re: Life is about pain and misery The poems bogged down with grammatical errors and it really didn't flow well in my opinion. ^^;; It could be improved but it has a nice simple touch to it. Nice work. __________________
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