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    Unhappy I died tonight

    Would it make you happy, If I were dead?
    If I just choked on every f*cked up word thats been said?
    Gagged on your hatred. Suffocate in my response.
    You'd probably stand there laughing with no sense of loss.

    What If tonight...was the night that I died.
    swallowed every mother-f*cking pill that was ever prescribed.
    I would look back on this world, with vision so hazy.
    As you all stand there laughing. "Damn, she really was crazy!"

    Then YOU could know how it feels to be the only parent he has.
    You couldn't just wait to be a MAN, before you become a dad.
    But it'd be ok... My death should set you all free.
    Unless you look at our sons face... a piece of me you'd still see.

    Would you remember that rid of me is what you said you wanted?
    You'll never be annoyed again... maybe just haunted.
    Hurt me, mock me, laugh it up until Im deceast.
    See if then, you could find your inner peace.

    This feeling of unwanted. Of being your f*cking disease.
    Have I finally found the cure, a way to put you at ease.
    Sometimes I feel that death would be my remedy for feeling alone.
    I just hope the closest I come to death, is writing this poem.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Life after Death

    ...How sad.... This is a really sad poem but I enjoy reading it as welll. This is real good and a bit sad though. I hope to read more in the future!!! Try staying cheerful at least! If you are then I'm glad!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Life after Death

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    ...How sad.... This is a really sad poem but I enjoy reading it as welll. This is real good and a bit sad though. I hope to read more in the future!!! Try staying cheerful at least! If you are then I'm glad!!!
    Nah I cant say that I'm all too cheery... Poems Like this dont spawn from sunshine and roses.. Not for me anyway...

    It does make me smile alittle to see YOUR comments tho. You just joined not long ago it looks like... but your kicking ass in your post count!

    Keep it up and you'll be giving Hassun some good competition for his title of "top poster".
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Life after Death

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Nah I cant say that I'm all too cheery... Poems Like this dont spawn from sunshine and roses.. Not for me anyway...

    It does make me smile alittle to see YOUR comments tho. You just joined not long ago it looks like... but your kicking ass in your post count!

    Keep it up and you'll be giving Hassun some good competition for his title of "top poster".
    Well thats great to hear! I really like your poem and you make poems really fast thats what makes you so creative! I really hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: Life after Death

    Wow... all of the poems that you've ever wrote seems to be about your husband hurting you a lot. Ouch..
    Tho I hope that you'll feel better, this sorta poem really runs deep. Especially when you make it rhyme. I can't say anything else, just plain emotional. Keep up the good work

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    Re: Life after Death

    Wow. this title caought my eye and I just signed up here...
    This poem is a bit scary for me. as I hope the person write it was not thinking of doing harm to themself.
    A husband should never hurt his wife.

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    Re: Life after Death

    Heh, LOL. Husband... That dude ain't her husband.


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    Re: Life after Death

    Quote Originally Posted by atomik_sprout View Post
    Heh, LOL. Husband... That dude ain't her husband.
    you say lol, im not sure the funny thing of this poem. Just sad and scary.
    not her husband?
    O I was not sure, but it seem that way. you seem to know about peach_follows? shes you AO buddy or some thing?... i ask becuse i thougt much about this writer all day. made me sad. i wonder that she is ok.

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