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    Life Bloodshed

    I stand in a rain of thunder
    My blood washing down on my face
    I wish I never done this
    My feeling is so disgrace.

    I ran away from myself
    My life is in a annhalition
    Why do I do this?
    Put myself in these position?

    Hands full bad cuts
    Bleeding out of my wrists,
    If only I had beaten this
    Without using my fists.

    I can't keep on living,
    My past full of bloodshed
    If I ever be executed
    I wish to keep my head.

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    Re: Life Bloodshed

    I really like this poem HK. I think it's mostly because of the blood and regret in it, or maybe the hurt. It's another good write. Keep it up!

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    Re: Life Bloodshed

    Thank DS, this poem came from the heart actually and I don't think thats me though.

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    Re: Life Bloodshed

    oooo it sounds sooo emo!!!!!!11 ^^, but its really good ^^

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    Thanks EQ, lol and no am not a emo kid, I like writing, and thanks for a great commment T_T.

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    Re: Life Bloodshed

    Good poem it sounds like someone commited suicide and are now wishing they hadn't. Keep up the good work.
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    Re: Life Bloodshed

    I think that this poem really described your avatar's life- Kenshin
    Maybe you got the inspiration from him? xD
    Anyways, back to the poem- Short and sweet did the work Nice job.

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    Re: Life Bloodshed

    LOL, thanks Cherry and Elie, I guess your right about my poem sounds like suicide.

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