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Reply With QuoteI really like this poem HK. I think it's mostly because of the blood and regret in it, or maybe the hurt. It's another good write. Keep it up!
I stand in a rain of thunder
My blood washing down on my face
I wish I never done this
My feeling is so disgrace.
I ran away from myself
My life is in a annhalition
Why do I do this?
Put myself in these position?
Hands full bad cuts
Bleeding out of my wrists,
If only I had beaten this
Without using my fists.
I can't keep on living,
My past full of bloodshed
If I ever be executed
I wish to keep my head.
I really like this poem HK. I think it's mostly because of the blood and regret in it, or maybe the hurt. It's another good write. Keep it up!
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
Thank DS, this poem came from the heart actually and I don't think thats me though.
oooo it sounds sooo emo!!!!!!11 ^^, but its really good ^^
Thanks EQ, lol and no am not a emo kid, I like writing, and thanks for a great commment T_T.
Good poem it sounds like someone commited suicide and are now wishing they hadn't. Keep up the good work.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
I think that this poem really described your avatar's life- Kenshin
Maybe you got the inspiration from him? xD
Anyways, back to the poem- Short and sweet did the workNice job.
LOL, thanks Cherry and Elie, I guess your right about my poem sounds like suicide.
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