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    Re: Life Bloodshed

    yeah... i envy those who can make good poems.. ~.~

    good poem dear friend..i enjoyed it

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    Thanks ray, I still need a lot of work to be done on this though lol.

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    i really liked this i memorized the whole thing in skool. send me a private messege everytime u write another one.

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    Um? sure I guess lol, but I rather suprise with my poems, and thank you for a great comment.

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    your poem is great,...it's very sad and tragic...the charater's been living in darkness full of pain but in the end he's full of regrets but then we can never rewrite life itself...0.0...


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    Thank you pink for a awesome comment, and I think you are right about the person in this poem lol.

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    Re: Life Bloodshed

    that is really good. very expressive and slightly depressing but nevertheless i find it very well done.
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