Yes, yes yes yes.... great job. would be interested to know what inspired this... PM me? Or just reply here if you'd rather. Theres a lot of mention of God in this piece. Dunno how religious you are... or religion really matters in reguard to feeling this piece. I am not very religious myself, but have found myself thinking on a simular line as this piece seems to suggest. Esspecially concerning the knowledge of "god" and how narrow and closed humanitys vision is in comparison. I have been on a huge quantum physics kick as of late. That concept that we are all more responsible for our reality than we want to realize (like my sig?). So these lines really stuck out.
Either way, kudos... and do keep it up. This is some of the more interesting works I have seen recently. The flow was impressive. The only thing is that I do want to more behind the meaning of the poem and what inspired it.We know truth and love
Is too much to handle
So make up lies and call it life
So we can’t see truth through