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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,547 | Life of a candle Life of a Candle In the vast darkness of night, As the cold wind sings a lullaby The shining stars are none in the tranquil sky, Lingering solitude is at sight. In a small shanty across the woods, Is where a white lighted candle belong, Producing a little light and temporary warmth To a father, a mother and a son. Time is fleeting, the candle starts melting Little by little the white candle’s light weakening. The father held his wife and his son, As the cold night wind blows fiercely. The candle in the distant starts to weep Hopeless to give light in the entire night All it wanted is to keep the family warm, And to shine some light for the infinite darkness. >thanks for reading. You may comment on this poem, if you have critiques just let me know.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 5,581 | Re: Life of a candle very awesome poem and cruel just like in life sure thigs llok hopless and just when you think all is lost and the night will come to a dramatic end....it dosnt the night still falls and the harsh reality wins once more. its very cool how you portray this Raja and its very true to life ,there isnt always a happy ending even when there should be the odds are always against you ,even when things look like they cant get any worse they still do.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,547 | Re: Life of a candle @ chris:I am happy to seeyour comment Chris. Thanks. Yeah, there are times when life seemed so unfair and unjust. @Nightmaregirl: wow thanks for your comment, i do appreciate.
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