Life Change

My soul cool as the water
My life full of spirit
I prayed to my ancestors
I know they could hear it.

I look up in the sky
I asked them to accept me
The only reason is
I always want to be free.

I think of all the worst times
Remembering all the bad things
Now I just want forget
Because I know what death brings.

now that is tragicfull...
nice poem man.. no wonder u said..
trained ^^ :p

that was very beautiful. i liked it. are there any more?

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Originally Posted by moonlight_child

that was very beautiful. i liked it. are there any more?

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LoL, thank you and there will be more, I have one last poem up my sleeve, but till now I have to think of more.