Life Change

*hellknight* · Apr 04, 2007, 01:19 PM

My soul cool as the water
My life full of spirit
I prayed to my ancestors
I know they could hear it.

I look up in the sky
I asked them to accept me
The only reason is
I always want to be free.

I think of all the worst times
Remembering all the bad things
Now I just want forget
Because I know what death brings.

*RayMe* · Apr 04, 2007, 02:20 PM

now that is tragicfull...
nice poem man.. no wonder u said..
trained ^^

moonlight_child · Apr 05, 2007, 09:36 AM

that was very beautiful. i liked it. are there any more?

*hellknight* · Apr 05, 2007, 09:38 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by moonlight_child

that was very beautiful. i liked it. are there any more?

LoL, thank you and there will be more, I have one last poem up my sleeve, but till now I have to think of more.

Apr 04, 2007, 01:19 PM	#1 (permalink)
hellknight Hell Enforcer Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: South dakota, Native American Posts: 1,442 Thanks: 2 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 15,340	Life Change My soul cool as the water My life full of spirit I prayed to my ancestors I know they could hear it. I look up in the sky I asked them to accept me The only reason is I always want to be free. I think of all the worst times Remembering all the bad things Now I just want forget Because I know what death brings.
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Apr 04, 2007, 02:20 PM	#2 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: Life Change now that is tragicfull... nice poem man.. no wonder u said.. trained ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Apr 05, 2007, 09:36 AM	#3 (permalink)
moonlight_child Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Where Rock n Roll Come Alive Posts: 138 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 7,293	Re: Life Change that was very beautiful. i liked it. are there any more? __________________ Love is like a gust of wind; it blows and then goes away... Without you, my soul goes out of control on the brink of danger... My world is already in a violent storm
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