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Reply With QuoteOh how amazing!!! It seem so interesting reading this and it was so cool reading it as well. And it was like a two sum poem at the same time!!!! I love it! I hope to see more!
these aren't my best poems aren't my best but I'd like to know what you guys think.
Life
Life is forever
Something that has never ended.
It is an endless endevoure
That is what God intended.
To fight, to dream
And make something out of nothing
No matter hot hard it may seem.
We cry, we scream, we sing.
Then we leave
Leaving behing others
Then it's thier turn to heave
The weight of being Mothers
Starting the cycle again
To care for who God may send.
Choice
How do you know when you are right?
When you should back down or stand and fight.
How do we know if this is the way.
If we should move or if we should stay.
How am I suppose to know the best choice?
Do I run or stay and have a burden to hoist.
How do I know when I mess up?
Do I know when I quit and give up?
Most of these answers I will never know.
The only way is to wait and see what life will show.
Oh how amazing!!! It seem so interesting reading this and it was so cool reading it as well. And it was like a two sum poem at the same time!!!! I love it! I hope to see more!
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
Great poems!!! I love it, it was just like reading the lines of Dalailama or something like that
Life... it made me want to hear an album by Good Charlotte "The Chronicles of Life and Death" and it's good!!!This poem makes me think about what life is like and what happens when Life and death meet...
Choice... it's always nice to know you're not alone... I'm glad to see that I'm not the only one who gets really confused in life and can't find another way out of it but waiting to see what happens...
I enjoyed these poems very much!!!!
Poems with very true meanings. I love your rhymes, I think this is the sorta poem that most can relate to, as we often wonder the same thing. Very original, keep it up.
Thank you all for the nice comments. It is very nice to hear that these poems are okay.
this poem near to the real life ...in many ways ....it 's amazing poem ....i like it it ...hope to see more from you ...keep up ....and it' sthe best ...
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