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    Life Cycles

    "Life turns and turns and turns, always changing, always repeating itself, nothing's ever the same..."

    Life you go through many different stages
    Some good
    Some bad
    Eternal Snake of time eats own tail
    Time consumes time
    Knowledge eats knowledge
    Everything is repeated
    Changed but repeated
    Nothing is new
    Only changed
    I know everything
    Everything is worth nothing
    Life is a tapestry weaved
    Weaved by the wheel of time
    Souls of silk
    Laid down beside
    Souls of satin
    Beside
    Souls of burlap
    Diaphanous clothe
    Worn like a glowing
    Flowing robe
    Life and Death love eachother
    They are married
    Life gives to Death
    Death gives to Life
    His River of Souls
    Feeds her
    Flowering newborn
    Rose red cheeks
    Their child
    Is your child
    They are my children
    They are all my children
    You are my child
    Do you know me?
    I know all
    For I'm inside all
    Nothing escapes me
    I'm in your soul
    I see with the eyes of the air you breathe
    Your mind is my tongue

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    Sometimes sweet is short. Nevertheless, this poem would have been awesome if it werent for it's short verses.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Life Cycles

    mm.. i do not think the same as you.
    .. hm
    only want to comment some.(no afford to push you)
    i can not think that my life is nothing.
    it is important for me. because it is my life and i'm alive.

    just comment. hehe...(^^)

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    Re: Life Cycles

    Nice poem master_roshi. It was a bit long, but still it did what a poem is suppose to do.

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