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    Life &Death

    Life, it just slips away from you
    Death, it always welcome's you
    Everything has a moment
    Everything has a light.

    Life, its what you make it
    Death, it always takes it
    You, are slipping away
    Me, i dont know what to say

    Life, just a little bit longer
    Death, why dont you hurry up and die?
    Pointless,everything seems to just fade away
    Nothing,just like your day why bother getting out of bed

    Life. i really love you and you make my day
    Death .whats taking so long you misrable bum your worthless
    You,its about time you opened up your eye's to the truth
    Me , if only the moment lasted longer them maybe i would smile

    Life, it full of suprises and alot of desire for what you dont have
    Death ,forget those trinket's and follow me to the dark abyss
    You,how come you just cant say no? when its really just that simple
    Me , i lost my last tear drop and none will fall for you isn't that crazy?

    . any comments or sugesstions would be helpfull
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Life &Death

    Wow,this was really good big bro.I like it alot.But of course I love all of your work lol But my fav. part was...

    Life, it just slips away from you
    Death, it always welcome's you
    Everything has a moment
    Everything has a light.


    Awesome job as always big bro
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Life &Death

    This poem is great and very deep. Hardcore man keep up the great work

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    Re: Life &Death

    Reminds me of my Bi-polar. It kinda works like that.........
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: Life &Death

    im glad everyone liked it i was going for a dark theme here but wanted it
    to be like a questions poem if that makes since.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Life &Death

    Yeah it does.........You want ppl to interpret the poem according to their own POVs. That's how I read it...
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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    Re: Life &Death

    thats cool im glad you sat it like that
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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