Life, it just slips away from you
Death, it always welcome's you
Everything has a moment
Everything has a light.
Life, its what you make it
Death, it always takes it
You, are slipping away
Me, i dont know what to say
Life, just a little bit longer
Death, why dont you hurry up and die?
Pointless,everything seems to just fade away
Nothing,just like your day why bother getting out of bed
Life. i really love you and you make my day
Death .whats taking so long you misrable bum your worthless
You,its about time you opened up your eye's to the truth
Me , if only the moment lasted longer them maybe i would smile
Life, it full of suprises and alot of desire for what you dont have
Death ,forget those trinket's and follow me to the dark abyss
You,how come you just cant say no? when its really just that simple
Me , i lost my last tear drop and none will fall for you isn't that crazy?
. any comments or sugesstions would be helpfull
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Wow,this was really good big bro.I like it alot.But of course I love all of your work lolBut my fav. part was...
Life, it just slips away from you
Death, it always welcome's you
Everything has a moment
Everything has a light.
Awesome job as always big bro
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
This poem is great and very deep. Hardcore man keep up the great work
Reminds me of my Bi-polar. It kinda works like that.........
NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
Move Along.
im glad everyone liked it i was going for a dark theme here but wanted it
to be like a questions poem if that makes since.
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Yeah it does.........You want ppl to interpret the poem according to their own POVs. That's how I read it...
Move Along.
thats cool im glad you sat it like that
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
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