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    Life or Death

    i got a bit lazy at the end

    “Life or Death”

    What is it in this world
    that makes us wonder what’s beyond?
    Is there something more
    behind this ripple in the pond?
    Are we insignificant
    Or are we almighty?
    And will this count across
    The plane of what we know and see?
    How does one’s own life effect
    What happens when they pass?
    Are they driven mad
    Or were they built to last?
    Fate is unescapable
    As most deny to know
    Living life as always,
    Until life lets one go.
    While taking a downward turn
    One finds their destination’s set
    Looking back at the world they left
    And who their actions met.
    What control one has in life
    doesn’t matter much in here
    One’s soul is trapped in violence,
    Their soul consumed by fear.
    Inside the great beyond we find
    How differently fate planned.
    What one thinks is in their control
    Is taken out of hand.
    There is no real free will
    Defying what one thinks.
    Everything is planned out
    To put one on the brink.
    Our lives are all preplanned,
    And one has no control.
    And it takes a person’s death
    To teach what one can’t know
    Enjoy life as it comes,
    For when the time arrives,
    We’ll all be burning below
    Or soaring beyond the skies.
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    Re: Life or Death

    Quote Originally Posted by NeoDeath90 View Post
    i got a bit lazy at the end

    “Life or Death”

    What is it in this world
    that makes us wonder what’s beyond?
    Is there something more
    behind this ripple in the pond?
    Are we insignificant
    Or all we almighty?
    And will this count across
    The plane of what we know and see?
    How does one’s own life effect
    What happens when they pass?
    Are they driven mad
    Or were they built to last?
    Fate is unescapable
    As most deny to know
    Living life as always,
    Until life lets one go.
    While taking a downward turn
    One finds their destination’s set
    Looking back at the world they left
    And who their actions met.
    What control one has in life
    doesn’t matter much in here
    One’s soul is trapped in violence,
    Their soul consumed by fear.
    Inside the great beyond we find
    How differently fate planned.
    What one thinks is in their control
    Is taken out of hand.
    There is no real free will
    Defying what one thinks.
    Everything is planned out
    To put one on the brink.
    Our lives are all preplanned,
    And one has no control.
    And it takes a person’s death
    To teach what one can’t know
    Enjoy life as it comes,
    For when the time arrives,
    We’ll all be burning below
    Or soaring beyond the skies.
    I like your poem. I understand what it means. I've lost someone dear to me, so I understand what the poem is saying.

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