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    Life and Death:

    Life and Death walk hand and hand,
    One before another,
    One after another,
    One comes then another goes,
    Hand and hand they walk to and fro,
    Life and Death walk hand and hand.

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    Re: " Life and Death " A tribute to the Souless

    awesome poem man, keep it up.

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    wow, tht's so true abt Life n Death. Nice one dude, keep it up.

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    I will
    I will indeed

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    Re: " Life and Death " A tribute to the Souless

    Yet another neat poem, Viper. I like the themes that you choose to emphasize in your poems, but I would suggest to put a little more work onto this work. You should stick with this theme, but maybe do a little more elaboration. It can turn into a great piece. Keep it up. ^_^

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    Great poem Viper, awesome work Keep it up ^_^

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    Re: " Life and Death " A tribute to the Souless

    that was impressive keep it up

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    Re: " Life and Death " A tribute to the Souless

    yay! Been waiting for more of your poetry. I like this one. So simple but great!

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