" Life and Death " A tribute to the Souless

viper11025 · Apr 29, 2006, 01:56 PM

Life and Death:

Life and Death walk hand and hand,
One before another,
One after another,
One comes then another goes,
Hand and hand they walk to and fro,
Life and Death walk hand and hand.

*ketaro* · Apr 29, 2006, 03:46 PM

awesome poem man, keep it up.

*Blade X* · Apr 29, 2006, 04:00 PM

wow, tht's so true abt Life n Death. Nice one dude, keep it up.

viper11025 · Apr 29, 2006, 04:25 PM

I will
I will indeed

kedar · Apr 29, 2006, 04:29 PM

Yet another neat poem, Viper. I like the themes that you choose to emphasize in your poems, but I would suggest to put a little more work onto this work. You should stick with this theme, but maybe do a little more elaboration. It can turn into a great piece. Keep it up. ^_^

*Rave_Grip* · Apr 30, 2006, 06:46 PM

Great poem Viper, awesome work

Keep it up ^_^

sora the king of dreams · Apr 30, 2006, 07:25 PM

that was impressive keep it up

Nympho · Apr 30, 2006, 07:26 PM

yay! Been waiting for more of your poetry. I like this one. So simple but great!

Sazzy · May 01, 2006, 05:08 AM

i felt the same as Kedar, i felt it could have been a little longer. as was getting into it was ending. Just how i feel.

viper11025 · May 01, 2006, 02:24 PM

I am good a poetry.
But better at stories.
I have poetry stuck in my head cya soon.

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ketaro Its Over 9000! Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,247 Thanks: 27 Thanked 34 Times in 32 Posts Credits: 24,435	Re: " Life and Death " A tribute to the Souless awesome poem man, keep it up.
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kedar Warrior Monk Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: Monk Society Posts: 2,973 Thanks: 3 Thanked 7 Times in 7 Posts Credits: 18,292	Re: " Life and Death " A tribute to the Souless Yet another neat poem, Viper. I like the themes that you choose to emphasize in your poems, but I would suggest to put a little more work onto this work. You should stick with this theme, but maybe do a little more elaboration. It can turn into a great piece. Keep it up. ^_^ __________________ Who's where today?
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Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 701	Re: " Life and Death " A tribute to the Souless yay! Been waiting for more of your poetry. I like this one. So simple but great! __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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Sazzy Member of 22 yr old Club Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: In my imagination restricted by British Society! Posts: 1,835 Thanks: 7 Thanked 19 Times in 15 Posts Credits: 34,739	Re: " Life and Death " A tribute to the Souless i felt the same as Kedar, i felt it could have been a little longer. as was getting into it was ending. Just how i feel. __________________ FAVOURITE THREADS EXPLAIN why, or risk an infraction. Well Just one more sig won't hurt, right? how about another??? Sazzy-Bu.co.uk
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viper11025 Under Surveilance Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Ughh....Ask? Posts: 366 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 664	Re: " Life and Death " A tribute to the Souless I am good a poetry. But better at stories. I have poetry stuck in my head cya soon.
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