Thread: Life and Dreams

u know what i think of it
heck we wrote it did we not
so yea keep up the good work ok

I think it's awesome. Alot better than some of the stuff I've written.

Thanks Draconso, and Chrystalann I would have hoped you to like it. lol. thanks guys.

Awwww......that was really sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job!!!!!!!!

aww thats soooooo cute ichigo!!
I lvoe it. even though its short its stilll really good.

Sometimes I myself find it hard to write one thing with other people... At least poems because poets writing styles usually differ greatly. Either way I think this turned out really well. It's short but gets to the point. A cute love-ish poem :P

Originally Posted by Ichigo_06

You know my name,
You know my voice,
You knew I'd call.

Time goes by fast,
But yet so slow,
As we watch things change around us.

Our hearts yern to beat as one,
As we over come all
despite the distance between us.

This poem was writen together with chrystalann2004. hope you guys like this one.

very good collaberation wonderfull