Life and Dreams

Ichigo_06 · Oct 01, 2007, 07:51 AM

You know my name,
You know my voice,
You knew I'd call.

Time goes by fast,
But yet so slow,
As we watch things change around us.

Our hearts yern to beat as one,
As we over come all
despite the distance between us.

This poem was writen together with chrystalann2004. hope you guys like this one.

chrystalann2004 · Oct 04, 2007, 05:59 AM

u know what i think of it
heck we wrote it did we not
so yea keep up the good work ok

Draconos167 · Oct 04, 2007, 06:13 AM

I think it's awesome. Alot better than some of the stuff I've written.

Ichigo_06 · Oct 04, 2007, 07:02 AM

Thanks Draconso, and Chrystalann I would have hoped you to like it. lol. thanks guys.

Astaroth · Oct 04, 2007, 02:56 PM

Awwww......that was really sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great job!!!!!!!!

P.R. Princess · Oct 04, 2007, 06:20 PM

aww thats soooooo cute ichigo!!
I lvoe it. even though its short its stilll really good.

Darkened_Star · Oct 05, 2007, 08:05 AM

Sometimes I myself find it hard to write one thing with other people... At least poems because poets writing styles usually differ greatly. Either way I think this turned out really well. It's short but gets to the point. A cute love-ish poem :P

Lupas · Oct 05, 2007, 12:23 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ichigo_06

You know my name,
You know my voice,
You knew I'd call.

Time goes by fast,
But yet so slow,
As we watch things change around us.

Our hearts yern to beat as one,
As we over come all
despite the distance between us.

This poem was writen together with chrystalann2004. hope you guys like this one.

very good collaberation wonderfull

Ichigo_06 · Oct 05, 2007, 12:28 PM

Thank you guys I apprecate you r feed back and I am glad you liked it.

ice viper · Oct 05, 2007, 03:11 PM

Very good Ichigo! I'm glad that you both were able to make this poem. Keep up with the good work. I can't wait to read more from you.

tora_tora_yatta · Oct 05, 2007, 06:25 PM

That was very good Ichigo and Chrystalann...I loved the poem keep up the good work and can't wait to hear more from one or both of you

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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,744	Life and Dreams You know my name, You know my voice, You knew I'd call. Time goes by fast, But yet so slow, As we watch things change around us. Our hearts yern to beat as one, As we over come all despite the distance between us. This poem was writen together with chrystalann2004. hope you guys like this one. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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chrystalann2004 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: Salt Lake City, U.T. Posts: 147 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,530	Re: Life and Dreams u know what i think of it heck we wrote it did we not so yea keep up the good work ok
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Draconos167 Newbie Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: At The Wall Of the First Gate, Between Life and Death.... Posts: 4 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 221	Re: Life and Dreams I think it's awesome. Alot better than some of the stuff I've written.
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,744	Re: Life and Dreams Thanks Draconso, and Chrystalann I would have hoped you to like it. lol. thanks guys. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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Astaroth Chtonian Slayer Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know Posts: 563 Thanks: 23 Thanked 47 Times in 45 Posts Credits: 31,449	Re: Life and Dreams Awwww......that was really sweet!!!!!!!!!!!!! Great job!!!!!!!! __________________ DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
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P.R. Princess NalaMidnight Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Virginia Posts: 900 Thanks: 3 Thanked 17 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 14,170	Re: Life and Dreams aww thats soooooo cute ichigo!! I lvoe it. even though its short its stilll really good. __________________ ~GUNSLINGER~A7X=MIA~ ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~ ~I give my heart and everything to my sailor~
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Darkened_Star Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Earth Posts: 334 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,118	Re: Life and Dreams Sometimes I myself find it hard to write one thing with other people... At least poems because poets writing styles usually differ greatly. Either way I think this turned out really well. It's short but gets to the point. A cute love-ish poem :P __________________
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Ichigo_06 Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain. Posts: 611 Thanks: 15 Thanked 10 Times in 10 Posts Credits: 4,744	Re: Life and Dreams Thank you guys I apprecate you r feed back and I am glad you liked it. __________________ ナサンフォオツド Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever! Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
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ice viper Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: I'm lost Posts: 212 Thanks: 5 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 3,404	Re: Life and Dreams Very good Ichigo! I'm glad that you both were able to make this poem. Keep up with the good work. I can't wait to read more from you.
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tora_tora_yatta Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: In the arms of my loved one! Posts: 124 Thanks: 2 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 616	Re: Life and Dreams That was very good Ichigo and Chrystalann...I loved the poem keep up the good work and can't wait to hear more from one or both of you __________________ Made by mi amigo Mveli2
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