Life Dreams

Dreams can be like fantasies
Parts of your wildest desires
To get the prized money,
Or to get the car you always wanted.
Possibly the girl or boy of your dreams.

I kept having such dreams
Never ending like my mind was some falls
Kept poring out, never stopping.
When it gets the the greatest part,
A sudden dam closes the fall
And halts the flow of the dream
And I always want to go back
To where ever it was, to relive it again
Just one more time

I have this specific dream
And I'll never forget it
I've met this special girl
Wonderful as can be
We've spent much time together
And like I've got the whole world by my side

So when we lay there
Under the stars, a sudden shock happened
Is this a dream? But, a kiss made me realize
No, this can't be just a dream
But The dream, happening in real life.

Writer's Notes: Blah...Writer's block for about month sucks. And also being busy sucks too. I just wanted to write something, just something. And this kinda came into mind. I know it's not too good. But, criticism is highly recommended.

Very nice... very nice, I like it. Good work for something you just threw down for the heck of it. Yes, very nice.

agreed with umbriel.. very nice indeed... ^^

"I have this specific dream
And I'll never forget it
I've met this special girl
Wonderful as can be
We've spent much time together
And like I've got the whole world by my side"

hmm... this part...is kinda sweet... but the wording to it dont make it sounds any sweeter... :p...try use more hmm..how to say it...sweeter ways of saying things..

this is good... ^^ keep it up..and i'll be keeping an eye for you.. :)