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    The life of a fangirl

    I am your fangirl
    Yes its true
    i never been no ones fangirl but with you

    you write so passionately
    as if you bring your words to life
    your stroke of a pen is the same as one of a knife

    You create profound images of beauty
    Images of romance and passion
    images only the privliged have a chance of seeing
    Images all can glace if they imagine.

    You express the true art of romance and make me swoon to the floor
    Begging and peading for you to write even more

    Such enticing poetry
    with a hint of modern day twist
    Such moments you describe that make me go into a state of bliss

    You make me go into a state of felicity
    a state of happiness and joy
    who knew such words of love and romance could do that to a cold hearted demoness.

    I am your fangirl and I will alwas be.
    This is the life of the fangirl who, as of now, is in her total state of felicity.

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    Re: The life of a fangirl

    Nice flow throughout that one. I could feel the emotion through it as well. Sounds like someone likes the words of another so well.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: The life of a fangirl

    Yes I Do!!!! *squee*
    I Love Your Work !!!!!
    Thank You!

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    Re: The life of a fangirl

    Congrats on the fangirl, Shade! LOL.

    On a serious note, I really like this one. It makes for a good tribute.

    You express the true art of romance and make me swoon to the floor
    Begging and peading for you to write even more
    I'm quite fond of that line. It reminds me of when I'm sucked in to other people's work. ^_^ Your rhyming was well put as well. Kudos!


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    Re: The life of a fangirl

    it really was well written although just one thing that caught my attention was the variation in stanza's, it would have been nice to follow the pattern of 2,3,4,2,3,4 lines per stanza but it didn't continue, it just seemed a little messy in that aspect.

    Otherwise, you really did let your passion for someone's work inspire you to create a response to it. It was a good concept to use and you did it really well too. It was only the number of line per stanza that let it down a little, not too much for you to loose the concept but only enough to catch your attention.
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