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| Hybrid Humanoid Forever Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: In a Purified Realm Of Lightness
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![]() Credits: 20,887 | The world that revolves is an enormous that cares about our lives we the people destroy that hope that can be careless never looking ahead on what is going on, even though they have done it there is nothing they can do to change it what is done is done our lives is always counting on whatever is made by others, my choice of example is starting to make a new life that inserts from beginning to end which we cannot give up easily in life we must keep on trying to keep this world in harmony rather then loosing it to just shadows and fear because that is not an option to just give up for, the life of others depends on what are your factors that you come up with and now it is time for you to show an example that is unforgivable to them by making good things again even if they reject you, you must keep on trying to tell them that you have changed and made a new life in the world and everyone will now how much you care for the life of others and you will keep on changing until there is no badness in life because every single person in this globe wants to be in such good hands rather then living in fear my only option in life is inserting to a new whole person that everyone will admire at most through there remains of life that will keep on living. ^_^ hope everyone likes this one i have inserted all of my efforts into completing it
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![]() ![]() Credits: 2,215 | Re: Life Insertion Um... I couldn't even finish reading this. It seemed to wordy, using complex words in perhaps the wrong context is not impressive to me... I got the impression that you were trying to make this profound statement about life, and you were trying to do so in an intelligent mannor. But I couldn't focus because you used virtually NO punctuation! Not a capital letter or period in sight.... So I couldnt tell where a sentence began or ended... Now, I dont mean to be a stickler, but I had to be honest. I still appreciate the effort. And I'd love to read more from you. I wouldn't mind re-reading this one after you've done some editing... So, I hope you consider it. ![]() |
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