Thread: life is like a boat

This is not where poems belong, but I am sure a mod will correct it.

I have to be honest.... I find this suspicious. I've seen some of your previous posts, with many spelling and grammatical errors. And then you post this, which is practically perfect.
I'm not going to bother researching this... its not my job... (At least I hope I don't). But I'm suspicious. If I am wrong please do consider this a compliment, that I find this piece to good to be true.

i dono wht ya meant up there but i can swear and insure to you that i wrote it in microsoft word alone with ma bare hands
i dono wht ur up to or whts ur point or aim and honestly i dont care
but for the record the microsoft word corrects the spellings and gramatical mistakes besides i dont like accomplements i only would like the truth an i donot fear death
and if you want sth to prove my skills ill write a poem ive made

Originally Posted by bloody rain

i dono wht ya meant up there but i can swear and insure to you that i wrote it in microsoft word alone with ma bare hands
i dono wht ur up to or whts ur point or aim and honestly i dont care
but for the record the microsoft word corrects the spellings and gramatical mistakes besides i dont like accomplements i only would like the truth an i donot fear death
and if you want sth to prove my skills ill write a poem ive made

she's not saying you are bad. she is implying that she is suspicious that you plagiarized the material.

all in all though, i must say i like how you wrote it in two langauges, making it even more deep, IMO

konichiwa

thnx i know wht she means an i really dont care but thnx to her cuz i dont like shit
acomplements and thnking sth that y0ou dont like so i liked you honesty and i wana say say wht eva ya like cuz nothing eva hurts me and i conclude this with respect to all and thnx to neo death for commenting
remember always say the truth cuz thtas wht i love the most even if you think it would hurt me nothihng does
arregatto gozaimase nisa sempai
oiasemanaseh
gozasesama

Well, if you "like the truth", then I'd hope you weren't too offended by my honesty. I probably wouldn't have been suspicious at all had you not posted something before without giving credit to the original artist.

I am not above being wrong... And as I said earlier, I'm only suspicious because I find the piece to be so well written. (In comparison to other posts.) So if what you say is true, and you wrote it, then why not take my input gracefully? I mean, being an UNBELIEVABLY good artist, is nothing to get upset or defensive over.

Ha! What? That's terrible, ok I get it you dont care but that sloppy? Just atleast try to improve your responses so that you can be completely credited correctly or so that people can understanded the first time read.
Terrible as you write, the poem was not bad.
Think of it as this when your done writing your post....stop and look at it check over what make's sense and what doesn't.
Go over it and over it until you think its good enough to be posted but honestly that's terrible and needs to improve.

Good job on the poem.

ok thnx for posting
but wht you say is that you want me to lie or to acomlimize something i dislike or hate
in fact i dono whts wrong with the universe acting strange a bit so youre now sad cuz of my posting and you think your posting was good enough
wht?????
i mean be4 judging ppl take a quiet look at urself
ur just telling me to be fake to be someone i really am not and i cant accept it
but thnx for ur honesty ksama