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    life is like a boat

    Nobody knows who I really am
    I never felt this empty before
    And if I ever need someone to come along,
    Who's gonna comfort me, and keep me strong

    We are all rowing the boat of fate
    The waves keep on coming and we can't escape
    But if we ever get lost on our way
    The waves would guide you through another day




    dooku de iki o shiteru toomei ni natta mitai
    Far away, I'm breathing, as if I were transparent

    kudayami ni omoe dakedo mekaku shisarete tadake
    It would seem I was in the dark, but I was only blindfolded

    inori o sasagete atarashii hi o matsu
    I give a prayer as I wait for the new day

    asayaka ni hikaru umi sono hate made
    Shining vividly up to the edge of that sea




    Nobody knows who I really am
    Maybe they just don't give a damn
    But if I ever need someone to come along
    I know you would follow me, and keep me strong


    hito no kokoro wa utsuriyuku mukedashiteku naru
    People's hearts change and sneak away from them

    tsuki wa mada atarashii shuuki de mune o tsureteku
    The moon in its new cycle leads the boats again


    And every time I see your face
    The ocean heaves up to my heart
    You make me wanna strain at the oars, and soon
    I can see the shore

    Oh, I can see the shore
    When will I see the shore?

    I want you to know who I really am
    I never thought I'd feel this way towards you
    And if you ever need someone to come along,
    I will follow you, and keep you strong




    tabi wa mada tsuzuiteku odayakana hi mo
    And still the journey continues on quiet days as well

    tsuki wa mata atarashii shuuki de ume o terashidasu
    The moon in its new cycle shines on the boats again


    inori o sasagete atarashii hi o matsu
    I give a prayer as I wait for the new day

    asayaka ni hikaru umi sono hate made
    Shining vividly up to the edge of that sea




    And every time I see your face
    The ocean heaves up to my heart
    You make me wanna strain at the oars, and soon
    I can see the shore




    Unmei no huneoko gi nami wa tsugi kara tsuki e to watashi-tachi o sou kedo
    We are rowing the boat of fate, but the waves keep attacking us

    Sore mo suteki na tabi ne, dore mo suteki na tabi ne
    But isn't that still a wonderful journey? Aren't any of them
    a wonderful journey?
    keep smilling it makes ppl wonder wht ur up to

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    Re: life is like a boat

    This is not where poems belong, but I am sure a mod will correct it.

    I have to be honest.... I find this suspicious. I've seen some of your previous posts, with many spelling and grammatical errors. And then you post this, which is practically perfect.
    I'm not going to bother researching this... its not my job... (At least I hope I don't). But I'm suspicious. If I am wrong please do consider this a compliment, that I find this piece to good to be true.
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    Re: life is like a boat

    i dono wht ya meant up there but i can swear and insure to you that i wrote it in microsoft word alone with ma bare hands
    i dono wht ur up to or whts ur point or aim and honestly i dont care
    but for the record the microsoft word corrects the spellings and gramatical mistakes besides i dont like accomplements i only would like the truth an i donot fear death
    and if you want sth to prove my skills ill write a poem ive made
    keep smilling it makes ppl wonder wht ur up to

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    Re: life is like a boat

    Quote Originally Posted by bloody rain View Post
    i dono wht ya meant up there but i can swear and insure to you that i wrote it in microsoft word alone with ma bare hands
    i dono wht ur up to or whts ur point or aim and honestly i dont care
    but for the record the microsoft word corrects the spellings and gramatical mistakes besides i dont like accomplements i only would like the truth an i donot fear death
    and if you want sth to prove my skills ill write a poem ive made
    she's not saying you are bad. she is implying that she is suspicious that you plagiarized the material.

    all in all though, i must say i like how you wrote it in two langauges, making it even more deep, IMO
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    Re: life is like a boat

    konichiwa

    thnx i know wht she means an i really dont care but thnx to her cuz i dont like shit
    acomplements and thnking sth that y0ou dont like so i liked you honesty and i wana say say wht eva ya like cuz nothing eva hurts me and i conclude this with respect to all and thnx to neo death for commenting
    remember always say the truth cuz thtas wht i love the most even if you think it would hurt me nothihng does
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    keep smilling it makes ppl wonder wht ur up to

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    Re: life is like a boat

    Well, if you "like the truth", then I'd hope you weren't too offended by my honesty. I probably wouldn't have been suspicious at all had you not posted something before without giving credit to the original artist.

    I am not above being wrong... And as I said earlier, I'm only suspicious because I find the piece to be so well written. (In comparison to other posts.) So if what you say is true, and you wrote it, then why not take my input gracefully? I mean, being an UNBELIEVABLY good artist, is nothing to get upset or defensive over.
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    Re: life is like a boat

    Ha! What? That's terrible, ok I get it you dont care but that sloppy? Just atleast try to improve your responses so that you can be completely credited correctly or so that people can understanded the first time read.
    Terrible as you write, the poem was not bad.
    Think of it as this when your done writing your post....stop and look at it check over what make's sense and what doesn't.
    Go over it and over it until you think its good enough to be posted but honestly that's terrible and needs to improve.

    Good job on the poem.
    "i ain't perfect, i have flaws.
    but the one thing that flaw ain't gon'
    be is me bein' fake. "

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    Re: life is like a boat

    ok thnx for posting
    but wht you say is that you want me to lie or to acomlimize something i dislike or hate
    in fact i dono whts wrong with the universe acting strange a bit so youre now sad cuz of my posting and you think your posting was good enough
    wht?????
    i mean be4 judging ppl take a quiet look at urself
    ur just telling me to be fake to be someone i really am not and i cant accept it
    but thnx for ur honesty ksama
    keep smilling it makes ppl wonder wht ur up to

    black 4 darkness red 4 blood and loves for losers

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