life is pain

People often think what’s life?

Why are we living though the pain of life?

There’s different ways of being hurt in this world.

Heart brake is the most common we see these days.

The way a boy or girl will never leave there house.

Or wont solaced as much with the people they were once friends with.

Boy/girl friends stab you in the heart while your so called friends stab you in
the back.

These types of pain can never be resolved.

It will always happen.


It doesn’t matter if you have been friends for years or been together for years either.

These things have always happened and that shall be the way it shall end.

Brake = break.

Other than that? A bit interesting, but nothing that interesting.

hmmm simple and to the point, it was enjoyable! though it brings that horrible truth out, ive seen it so many times, i havent done that to anyone but ive had it done to me. i enjoyed this poem and i look forward to more!

I enjoyed that poem. It's true. Depressing. It's reality.

Good job!

it's weird almost all poems on this forum are depressing. yours is no exeption. you make me wanna cry:(: . it made me remember of all the friends i've lost that way. the poem has a lot of truth to it.

True yet not-so-sad. Except for a few mistakes it was all good. Keep it up Lizzie! ^_^ 5/5!

Intresting topic equinn, and nice job putting it into words! Keep up the good work and I'll be looking for more of your work!:thumb:

hehe i thought it was really bad from what Kasai said

yeah lots of mistakes but i do spellcheck them ( its just i soo cant spell >_< )

but thats for the nice commets ^__^