Thread: Life without you!!

U making love poems i canu belive it
it rocks! !..! ^-^ !..!

It's awesome! Keep it up and write more

Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice

Every time i turn my head i see'your
face in a crowd of strangers,it's like
a bad infection my love for you is strong
i can't get you from my thoughts no matter how i try.

The breez is strong tonight, like
your breath is on on me, i feel alone
tonight oh my god i need your're loving
there nothing i want more ,than to hold you next to me.

With every breath i take i loose control
because your love is so powerful that it,
makes me faint as i fall short of breath
please won't you be with me and make me happy.

This life i live,its not what god intended i wanted
love all he gave me was cold winter's .to have you're
love at night would warm my heart and my soul,this
bitter cold i feel its just me missing you oh how i love you.

Everynight as a lay down the lonelyness screams out at
night,its so loud it makes my heart ache for you , how i
wish you were here everything would then be clear
but thats not how life works at all , life is nothing with out you.

2 months now from the day i lost your loving oh how i wish
i could take it all back , i was mistaken i thought i would never
loose you but i was wrong and now look at me,they you
miss things the most when there gone ,oh god i wish that were true.

I dont just miss you, i crave you're love and feelings no one could
make me feel like you did,theres no missing you only shadow's
mocking me like you were still here,missing you would be so easy
but my mind is gone all i see now is shadows left behind please god help me.

this one was a bit lengthy but the words wouldt stop comming out
this was a spur of the moment poem for something that was on my mind
comments and suggestions are welcome

is like u dint get much atencion cuz u dint make it blooddy like allways or something
but still it long and the timming is maganifico.

thanks im glad you like it i will make my next one bloody if thats what]
everyone likes just thought i would do this for the frams of mind i am in
before it goes away. but im really glad you liked and the timming was pretty easy
since i saw how i wanted it in my head before i wrote it

Yeah its a nice love poem
thats why i dont get attencion i only make much love poems or fantasys
well evry1 has there likes.

Nice HolderoftheDarkChalice! Keep it up! First love poem i'm assuming?

2and one acutally the 1rst one i did last night for a freind
i will do a dark poem next this one just was eating at me
so i had to let it out