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    Life without you!!

    Every time i turn my head i see'your
    face in a crowd of strangers,it's like
    a bad infection my love for you is strong
    i can't get you from my thoughts no matter how i try.

    The breez is strong tonight, like
    your breath is on on me, i feel alone
    tonight oh my god i need your're loving
    there nothing i want more ,than to hold you next to me.

    With every breath i take i loose control
    because your love is so powerful that it,
    makes me faint as i fall short of breath
    please won't you be with me and make me happy.

    This life i live,its not what god intended i wanted
    love all he gave me was cold winter's .to have you're
    love at night would warm my heart and my soul,this
    bitter cold i feel its just me missing you oh how i love you.

    Everynight as a lay down the lonelyness screams out at
    night,its so loud it makes my heart ache for you , how i
    wish you were here everything would then be clear
    but thats not how life works at all , life is nothing with out you.

    2 months now from the day i lost your loving oh how i wish
    i could take it all back , i was mistaken i thought i would never
    loose you but i was wrong and now look at me,they you
    miss things the most when there gone ,oh god i wish that were true.

    I dont just miss you, i crave you're love and feelings no one could
    make me feel like you did,theres no missing you only shadow's
    mocking me like you were still here,missing you would be so easy
    but my mind is gone all i see now is shadows left behind please god help me.

    this one was a bit lengthy but the words wouldt stop comming out
    this was a spur of the moment poem for something that was on my mind
    comments and suggestions are welcome
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Life without you!!

    U making love poems i canu belive it
    it rocks! !..! ^-^ !..!



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Life without you!!

    It's awesome! Keep it up and write more

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    Re: Life without you!!

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    Every time i turn my head i see'your
    face in a crowd of strangers,it's like
    a bad infection my love for you is strong
    i can't get you from my thoughts no matter how i try.

    The breez is strong tonight, like
    your breath is on on me, i feel alone
    tonight oh my god i need your're loving
    there nothing i want more ,than to hold you next to me.

    With every breath i take i loose control
    because your love is so powerful that it,
    makes me faint as i fall short of breath
    please won't you be with me and make me happy.

    This life i live,its not what god intended i wanted
    love all he gave me was cold winter's .to have you're
    love at night would warm my heart and my soul,this
    bitter cold i feel its just me missing you oh how i love you.

    Everynight as a lay down the lonelyness screams out at
    night,its so loud it makes my heart ache for you , how i
    wish you were here everything would then be clear
    but thats not how life works at all , life is nothing with out you.

    2 months now from the day i lost your loving oh how i wish
    i could take it all back , i was mistaken i thought i would never
    loose you but i was wrong and now look at me,they you
    miss things the most when there gone ,oh god i wish that were true.

    I dont just miss you, i crave you're love and feelings no one could
    make me feel like you did,theres no missing you only shadow's
    mocking me like you were still here,missing you would be so easy
    but my mind is gone all i see now is shadows left behind please god help me.

    this one was a bit lengthy but the words wouldt stop comming out
    this was a spur of the moment poem for something that was on my mind
    comments and suggestions are welcome
    is like u dint get much atencion cuz u dint make it blooddy like allways or something
    but still it long and the timming is maganifico.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Life without you!!

    thanks im glad you like it i will make my next one bloody if thats what]
    everyone likes just thought i would do this for the frams of mind i am in
    before it goes away. but im really glad you liked and the timming was pretty easy
    since i saw how i wanted it in my head before i wrote it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Life without you!!

    Yeah its a nice love poem
    thats why i dont get attencion i only make much love poems or fantasys
    well evry1 has there likes.



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    Re: Life without you!!

    Nice HolderoftheDarkChalice! Keep it up! First love poem i'm assuming?
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    Re: Life without you!!

    2and one acutally the 1rst one i did last night for a freind
    i will do a dark poem next this one just was eating at me
    so i had to let it out
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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