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    Life As You Think You Know It!

    Life so brilliant , so wonderful , things
    around it seem so vivid and restless
    nothing seems to make life seem pointless
    you think when you wake up thing are going
    to be OK.

    Life so harsh , so dark , so much pain
    there always a danger around some corner
    no matter where it is in life you turn , people
    think turning there heads from it makes it not
    be real but what you cant see can hurt you.

    You lay there bleeding from your eyes , your ears
    ring so loudly as you feel your legs go numb and you
    arms go limp , my god how life seems to have got your
    attention but its to late for you as life laughs at you
    as you lay there fading away into another bleak fate.


    Why is it that when you think of life you think
    of living for ever when the wise thing to do is to
    live every moment as if it were your last because
    it maybe so be weary of those chirping birds , the sun
    filled sky and the noise of laughter as those could
    be signs of your life ending very soon.

    this poem is about how reality can be ignore for so long
    before it hits you and there is nothing you can do about it.
    comments and sugestions are welcomed
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Life As You Think You Know It!

    Very good poem that has such a true meaning of how some people can take life for granted cause they're always thinking they have it all when at the same time it could all be taken away from them tomorrow. Great job sweetie and I can't wait to read more.
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