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    Life as you want it!

    A light breeze , a warm soft glow
    from the sun , breath in the fresh
    air your worries will melt away don't
    let what seems to pull you down
    keep you down.

    Feel the freedom of self expression
    being who you really are not ever
    letting those think being conformed
    is the best way for you , let it all
    just let it all go away.

    Something is always bringing you
    down , ball your fist up raising your
    middle finger saying **** the world
    because its your way or no way at all.

    Give no quarter for what you need and
    deserve this life is what you made it don't
    feel bad about it or think its something that
    shouldn't be , make the best of what you have
    screw the feelings and thoughts of others.

    So as i leave the final word if you cant
    handle the life you have you should never
    started the game that is called life , because
    your just waisting something that could be used
    for those who really need the life you complain
    .................................................. ................

    this poem is about how people always complain
    about how things are always holding the back or
    that there is just something *wrong* with them
    when all it is , is the fact they don't appreciate what
    they have.

    get over your selves there's more important
    things in life than wondering when the next love
    affair or best friend or even that awesome job will
    come , just accept what you have and if you get
    something great enjoy it if not life goes on don't
    waist it on stupid things.
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    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Life as you want it!

    Very true words you wrote cause it is so sensless of how people can sometimes no appreciate what they have cause they're constantly wanting more. GReat job sweetie.
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    Re: Life as you want it!

    A great and teaching poem... again... I hope people do learn from this one... People are like that- always wanting for more... some just can't change- it's so sad...
    Nice work Chris!!! ^^

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