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    Life's Frustrations!

    Life! it's what makes things so complicated
    the time spent with sadness ,and pain would
    be better spent on things that make the way
    you live far better than the hell you live in.

    Trust! why does it always come down to
    who you believe ,and what you fight for?,
    everything seems to just fade as you're
    paranoia grows from being hurt so many times.


    Hate! why is this always the easy way out?
    from walking away to inflicting hurt ,hate
    seems the easy way to go when Life and Trust
    are both abused.

    Everything is falling apart nothing you say
    will open my heart ,things are to far gone
    and my life is another tragic event that
    Life and Trust have gave to me.

    this poem is about how life always
    seems to bring out the worst in people
    or even make life almost unlivable . but there
    is always hope but this poem is about how it
    affects some people. any comment or sugestion
    is welcomed

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    Re: Life'e Frustrations!

    Everything is falling apart nothing you say
    will open my heart ,things are to far gone
    and my life is another tragic event that
    Life and Trust have gave to me.

    that line rite there made me think how i have a sucky life thx!
    the ideas of the poem were good cuz i think allota people can relate to this stuff, and your ideas were reasonable (i mean not rele stupid or weird) and your vocabulary was nice, and it gave the poem a sophistocated touch. nice !

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    Re: Life'e Frustrations!

    I can so relate to that ^_^ awesome job,who said life would be easy,am I right or am I right?

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    Re: Life's Frustrations!

    That was a great poem. It really pin pointed all the different ways that people look at life can sometimes be. Good job and I hope to read more soon.
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    Re: Life's Frustrations!

    Hey Bro! Once again truly awesome poem! The world can be a tough place to live and everyone has a different point of view! Outstanding job capturing the some of the ways of life! Now only if people would read my poem! By the way I left a reply to comment on my poem as well! Keep up the outstanding work Bro!

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    Re: Life's Frustrations!

    WOW! Another awesome poem big bro!!! And your words speak such truth about the world.Awesome job as always big bro!
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    Re: Life's Frustrations!

    thanks sis i am glad you liked it and i will post another soon
    i am still working on the last few lines if it but its becomming easier
    to do poems.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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