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Old Jun 21, 2006, 11:34 AM   #1 (permalink)
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If you'll all remember a poem written way back by Shade/K' Heart (my love), it was called )Blackness(. He wanted me to read a pain he went through, so I did. And then I decided to mirror his poem to what we mean to each other now. I hope you like it. (This is for you, Justin.)


I awake,
my eyes open,
now they perceive,
perfect light
sadness cannot pierce,
this safe shell,
that warms me.
I can feel now,
it's as if I’m in Heaven
I can fly and smile now
I have someone that cares
friends come and go
and we talk while they’re here
but sometimes they leave
and now I’m ok with that
happiness…
love…
I’m deaf to everyone but you
and blind too.
I only whisper for you
and you hear me
and come running
I cry for happiness now
I cannot even get
the satisfaction,
of brokenness.
no more anger in me
you’ve shown me home
that I never had before
made me feel safe
took away my fears
gone....
being alone was forever ago,
and now I am loved
hope
future
safety
warmth
a best friend
life
dreams.
happiness.
only one past...
and it's fading...
slowly...
fading...
into...
...
the...
...
light...
...
...............
......
......
......
hold.... me............ By Julia Drake (Red Rose)
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 11:47 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Awww... baby, that was too sweet. It's funny. you said mirror and did you ever. Every dot, every line... It was very good.
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 12:14 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Light

Another one of your poems that are pact with emotion! haha It was nice.
I thought this set of lines was the High light of your poem, it caught my eye.

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I only whisper for you
and you hear me
and come running
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 12:16 PM   #4 (permalink)
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such talent in the both of you...
i think i got water in my eyes...
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 12:17 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Light

I thought you were giving an opinion of your own poem for a second there

least it doesn't sound as depressing as the last poem I read
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Old Jun 21, 2006, 12:52 PM   #6 (permalink)
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very nice...it's interesting to see the talents of the AO members...good job
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Old Jun 22, 2006, 12:43 AM   #7 (permalink)
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This was a good one,I'll have to put up some of mine soon.
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Old Jun 22, 2006, 08:32 AM   #8 (permalink)
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That is so sweet!!

I like this part:
Quote:
hope
future
safety
warmth
The way you used them words make you think, which i don't usually do..XD

Very effective poem, you can just see the love in it! ^^
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Old Jun 23, 2006, 07:18 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Re: Light

Quote:
sadness cannot pierce,
this safe shell,
that warms me.
I can feel now
Excellent Vocabulary and good use of words. ^_^ Your ability to capture your emotions for that 'special someone' is superb.
All the best Sincere. I look forward to reading more. ^^
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Re: Light

that one is the sweetest poem i've ever read!
(sorry for that, i'm a sensitive person.... and when i read or watch beautiful poems or movies i cry!)
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