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    Light

    If you'll all remember a poem written way back by Shade/K' Heart (my love), it was called )Blackness(. He wanted me to read a pain he went through, so I did. And then I decided to mirror his poem to what we mean to each other now. I hope you like it. (This is for you, Justin.)


    I awake,
    my eyes open,
    now they perceive,
    perfect light
    sadness cannot pierce,
    this safe shell,
    that warms me.
    I can feel now,
    it's as if I’m in Heaven
    I can fly and smile now
    I have someone that cares
    friends come and go
    and we talk while they’re here
    but sometimes they leave
    and now I’m ok with that
    happiness…
    love…
    I’m deaf to everyone but you
    and blind too.
    I only whisper for you
    and you hear me
    and come running
    I cry for happiness now
    I cannot even get
    the satisfaction,
    of brokenness.
    no more anger in me
    you’ve shown me home
    that I never had before
    made me feel safe
    took away my fears
    gone....
    being alone was forever ago,
    and now I am loved
    hope
    future
    safety
    warmth
    a best friend
    life
    dreams.
    happiness.
    only one past...
    and it's fading...
    slowly...
    fading...
    into...
    ...
    the...
    ...
    light...
    ...
    ...............
    ......
    ......
    ......
    hold.... me............ By Julia Drake (Red Rose)
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    A white rose no longer alone
    I know who's heart it is to represent
    I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
    For he's the one that's heaven sent. :
    I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums

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    Re: Light

    Awww... baby, that was too sweet. It's funny. you said mirror and did you ever. Every dot, every line... It was very good.

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Light

    Another one of your poems that are pact with emotion! haha It was nice.
    I thought this set of lines was the High light of your poem, it caught my eye.

    I only whisper for you
    and you hear me
    and come running
    ^_^

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    such talent in the both of you...
    i think i got water in my eyes...

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    Re: Light

    I thought you were giving an opinion of your own poem for a second there

    least it doesn't sound as depressing as the last poem I read

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    very nice...it's interesting to see the talents of the AO members...good job

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    Re: Light

    This was a good one,I'll have to put up some of mine soon.
    Omae o Korosu!

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    Re: Light

    That is so sweet!!

    I like this part:
    hope
    future
    safety
    warmth
    The way you used them words make you think, which i don't usually do..XD

    Very effective poem, you can just see the love in it! ^^

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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