"Light and Dark"

When light rises from
the ground
Dark begin to lose the
battle from yin and yang
The sky begin to come
from light to dark
Now,it come to this
that light and dark never lose


I was bored and i'm not good at poetry but oh well

and i got a letter about this poem from poetry.com
they said i'm in a contest becase of this poem

nice man :thumb: I like it :D

i think it pretty good. a little on the short side though. put still pretty good.:thumb:

indeed. it's very well layed out and makes very good sense.

that is really good i wish i could think of something like that

I Like it, even thou it's stort. :D

I like it but it reminds about a line in a movie called White Dragon.

I liked that movie for the most part.
Good shorttie poem though.