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Old Apr 04, 2006, 01:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
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"Light and Dark"

When light rises from
the ground
Dark begin to lose the
battle from yin and yang
The sky begin to come
from light to dark
Now,it come to this
that light and dark never lose


I was bored and i'm not good at poetry but oh well

and i got a letter about this poem from poetry.com
they said i'm in a contest becase of this poem
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Old Apr 04, 2006, 02:06 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: "Light and Dark"

nice man I like it
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Old Apr 04, 2006, 02:08 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: "Light and Dark"

i think it pretty good. a little on the short side though. put still pretty good.
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Old Apr 04, 2006, 02:09 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: "Light and Dark"

indeed. it's very well layed out and makes very good sense.
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Old Apr 04, 2006, 02:13 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: "Light and Dark"

that is really good i wish i could think of something like that
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Old Apr 04, 2006, 03:47 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Re: "Light and Dark"

I Like it, even thou it's stort.
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Old Apr 06, 2006, 05:34 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: "Light and Dark"

I like it but it reminds about a line in a movie called White Dragon.
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Old Apr 06, 2006, 05:35 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Re: "Light and Dark"

I liked that movie for the most part.
Good shorttie poem though.
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Old Apr 06, 2006, 05:47 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Re: "Light and Dark"

Good poem. I look forward to ur next......
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Re: "Light and Dark"

Nice poem brother, keep it up.
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Old Apr 10, 2006, 06:57 AM   #11 (permalink)
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Re: "Light and Dark"

great poem, make sure to keep on writing!
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