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    "Light and Dark"

    When light rises from
    the ground
    Dark begin to lose the
    battle from yin and yang
    The sky begin to come
    from light to dark
    Now,it come to this
    that light and dark never lose


    I was bored and i'm not good at poetry but oh well

    and i got a letter about this poem from poetry.com
    they said i'm in a contest becase of this poem

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    Re: "Light and Dark"

    nice man I like it


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    Re: "Light and Dark"

    i think it pretty good. a little on the short side though. put still pretty good.

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    Re: "Light and Dark"

    indeed. it's very well layed out and makes very good sense.
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    Re: "Light and Dark"

    that is really good i wish i could think of something like that


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    Re: "Light and Dark"

    I Like it, even thou it's stort.
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    Re: "Light and Dark"

    I like it but it reminds about a line in a movie called White Dragon.

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    Re: "Light and Dark"

    I liked that movie for the most part.
    Good shorttie poem though.

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