"Light and Dark"

*name one* · Apr 04, 2006, 01:43 PM

When light rises from
the ground
Dark begin to lose the
battle from yin and yang
The sky begin to come
from light to dark
Now,it come to this
that light and dark never lose

I was bored and i'm not good at poetry but oh well

and i got a letter about this poem from poetry.com
they said i'm in a contest becase of this poem

*Zackraa* · Apr 04, 2006, 02:06 PM

nice man

I like it

BrightShadow_96 · Apr 04, 2006, 02:08 PM

i think it pretty good. a little on the short side though. put still pretty good.

*dark angel swordsman* · Apr 04, 2006, 02:09 PM

indeed. it's very well layed out and makes very good sense.

rock on · Apr 04, 2006, 02:13 PM

that is really good i wish i could think of something like that

*Mr. K* · Apr 04, 2006, 03:47 PM

I Like it, even thou it's stort.

Nympho · Apr 06, 2006, 05:34 PM

I like it but it reminds about a line in a movie called White Dragon.

viper11025 · Apr 06, 2006, 05:35 PM

I liked that movie for the most part.
Good shorttie poem though.

cerebrum · Apr 06, 2006, 05:47 PM

Good poem. I look forward to ur next......

*ketaro* · Apr 09, 2006, 09:31 AM

Nice poem brother, keep it up.

dum_sper0_spir0 · Apr 10, 2006, 06:57 AM

great poem, make sure to keep on writing!

Apr 04, 2006, 01:43 PM	#1 (permalink)
name one Just Trying To Live Life Join Date: Jun 2005 Posts: 510 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,057	"Light and Dark" When light rises from the ground Dark begin to lose the battle from yin and yang The sky begin to come from light to dark Now,it come to this that light and dark never lose I was bored and i'm not good at poetry but oh well and i got a letter about this poem from poetry.com they said i'm in a contest becase of this poem
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Apr 04, 2006, 02:06 PM	#2 (permalink)
Zackraa †Everyone Here Hates Me† Join Date: Jul 2005 Location: I have no idea Posts: 1,342 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 835	Re: "Light and Dark" nice man I like it __________________ †MyDeviant† †Myspace† †ZAnime† †My Shack† †My Gaia†
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BrightShadow_96 遁走より本当 Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: Inside Reality & Serenity Posts: 571 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,355	Re: "Light and Dark" i think it pretty good. a little on the short side though. put still pretty good. __________________
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Apr 04, 2006, 03:47 PM	#6 (permalink)
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Nympho Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: I get bored easily Posts: 511 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 601	Re: "Light and Dark" I like it but it reminds about a line in a movie called White Dragon. __________________ I'm a glass child. I am Hannah's regrets. Monster.
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viper11025 Under Surveilance Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: " Unknown & Unseen" Posts: 355 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 359	Re: "Light and Dark" I liked that movie for the most part. Good shorttie poem though.
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ketaro kitty wolf Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: 404 Not Found Posts: 4,212 Thanks: 22 Thanked 29 Times in 27 Posts Credits: 22,627	Re: "Light and Dark" Nice poem brother, keep it up.
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