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  1. Jun 25, 2007 10:25 AM #1
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    Light and dark

    The light is my guide
    To take my
    Where ever
    My soul
    Desires
    The dark is my rage
    slowing me down
    Blinding me
    From my goal
    When light
    And dark
    Intertwine
    They make
    A force
    Greater
    Than all onthers
    This force
    is called love.

    Well there it is.Hope you like it.
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  2. Jun 25, 2007 10:27 AM #2
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    Re: Light and dark

    wow what a great poem loved it, the way you use light and dark to describe love so moving


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  3. Jun 25, 2007 10:47 AM #3
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    Re: Light and dark

    Quote Originally Posted by aeonking View Post
    wow what a great poem loved it, the way you use light and dark to describe love so moving
    Thank you.thank you for your comment. .
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    Re: Light and dark

    very good poem im embarresed to say i dont know what intertwine means
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    Quote Originally Posted by levitatinganimelover View Post
    very good poem im embarresed to say i dont know what intertwine means

    Took me a while to figure it out to.it means to come together or mearge.And thank you very much.
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    Re: Light and dark

    Great poem indeed! It's just like a dark poem in a way but it's just so great so I simply loved it! I hope to see more of your work!
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    Thank you very much all of you. .
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    Re: Light and dark

    Light and dark to describe...oh it was marvalouse 4/5 keep it up but it was a bit short but i'm not complaining
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