Light (I'm not sure if this is good)

!flaminghate · Mar 16, 2007, 11:33 AM

There are times we’ve been in darkness
There are times we’ve been in shade
And in the times we’ve hit or miss
Like a light, we will not fade

We have been there through the rough and bad
We’ve been there when its all over
But in the end we are all glad
That we’ve caused a supernova

We are the light that you all see
The apple of your eye
To untold secrets we are the key
Together we’ve touched the sky

So now as one we’ll say goodbye
To a life we’ve known so long
To the horizon we will fly
Love will be our song

(not sure if this goes with it)

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Mar 16, 2007, 12:33 PM

the pic goes good with the poem
but it isnt as dark as your other
ones but its still a great poem and
i have been dopwn this road more than
once and your expression of devotion
to love is cool.

good poem

*CherryBlossom18* · Mar 17, 2007, 04:14 AM

It's a very good poem and the pic sets it off so well. I look forward to reading your next one.

!flaminghate · Mar 17, 2007, 07:21 AM

Thanks glad you liked this poem^_^
hope you guys read more of my poems and I think I'll start doing lyric.

KimiFemi · Mar 17, 2007, 01:17 PM

Wow ...
I really like this one!
two thumbs up! lol
it's such a sweet poem
didn't know you could write 'em this way
you did a really good job!
and the pic is perfect

*P.R. Princess* · Mar 17, 2007, 05:04 PM

aww I really like it. It's sooo good.
And the pic really dose go with poem.
It's like wat compliments it.
I hope to see more of yuor poems in the futer.(^.^)

!flaminghate · Mar 17, 2007, 10:10 PM

glad you guys like my poems ^_^
I have one poem that is a poem and a song

Mar 16, 2007, 11:33 AM	#1 (permalink)
!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	Light (I'm not sure if this is good) There are times we’ve been in darkness There are times we’ve been in shade And in the times we’ve hit or miss Like a light, we will not fade We have been there through the rough and bad We’ve been there when its all over But in the end we are all glad That we’ve caused a supernova We are the light that you all see The apple of your eye To untold secrets we are the key Together we’ve touched the sky So now as one we’ll say goodbye To a life we’ve known so long To the horizon we will fly Love will be our song (not sure if this goes with it)
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Mar 16, 2007, 12:33 PM	#2 (permalink)
HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,839 Thanks: 34 Thanked 33 Times in 31 Posts Credits: 5,581	Re: Light(I'm not sure if this is good) the pic goes good with the poem but it isnt as dark as your other ones but its still a great poem and i have been dopwn this road more than once and your expression of devotion to love is cool. good poem __________________
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Mar 17, 2007, 04:14 AM	#3 (permalink)
CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,616	Re: Light (I'm not sure if this is good) It's a very good poem and the pic sets it off so well. I look forward to reading your next one. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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Mar 17, 2007, 07:21 AM	#4 (permalink)
!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	Re: Light (I'm not sure if this is good) Thanks glad you liked this poem^_^ hope you guys read more of my poems and I think I'll start doing lyric.
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KimiFemi Otaku Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: So many places... I cant remember ... Posts: 476 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,584	Re: Light (I'm not sure if this is good) Wow ... I really like this one! two thumbs up! lol it's such a sweet poem didn't know you could write 'em this way you did a really good job! and the pic is perfect __________________ Secret Love "Love everyone unless they dont love you back" http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_d...ex.php?act=idx
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P.R. Princess NalaMidnight Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Virginia Posts: 910 Thanks: 3 Thanked 18 Times in 17 Posts Credits: 14,781	Re: Light (I'm not sure if this is good) aww I really like it. It's sooo good. And the pic really dose go with poem. It's like wat compliments it. I hope to see more of yuor poems in the futer.(^.^) __________________ ~ MYSPACE~AWESOME PLACE TO SAVE~
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!flaminghate Banned Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Immortal, till I die Posts: 464 Thanks: 4 Thanked 5 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 1,783	Re: Light (I'm not sure if this is good) glad you guys like my poems ^_^ I have one poem that is a poem and a song
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