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    Light (I'm not sure if this is good)

    There are times we’ve been in darkness
    There are times we’ve been in shade
    And in the times we’ve hit or miss
    Like a light, we will not fade

    We have been there through the rough and bad
    We’ve been there when its all over
    But in the end we are all glad
    That we’ve caused a supernova

    We are the light that you all see
    The apple of your eye
    To untold secrets we are the key
    Together we’ve touched the sky

    So now as one we’ll say goodbye
    To a life we’ve known so long
    To the horizon we will fly
    Love will be our song

    (not sure if this goes with it)

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    Re: Light(I'm not sure if this is good)

    the pic goes good with the poem
    but it isnt as dark as your other
    ones but its still a great poem and
    i have been dopwn this road more than
    once and your expression of devotion
    to love is cool.

    good poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Light (I'm not sure if this is good)

    It's a very good poem and the pic sets it off so well. I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: Light (I'm not sure if this is good)

    Thanks glad you liked this poem^_^
    hope you guys read more of my poems and I think I'll start doing lyric.

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    Re: Light (I'm not sure if this is good)

    Wow ...
    I really like this one!
    two thumbs up! lol
    it's such a sweet poem
    didn't know you could write 'em this way
    you did a really good job!
    and the pic is perfect

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    Re: Light (I'm not sure if this is good)

    aww I really like it. It's sooo good.
    And the pic really dose go with poem.
    It's like wat compliments it.
    I hope to see more of yuor poems in the futer.(^.^)

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    Re: Light (I'm not sure if this is good)

    glad you guys like my poems ^_^
    I have one poem that is a poem and a song

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