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    a lighter poem from me.

    Call me out
    You stayed inside
    One you love
    Is where you hide
    Shot me down as I flew by
    Crash and burn
    I think sometimes you forget where the heart is

    Answer no to these questions
    Let her go, learn a lesson
    It's not me, you're not listening now
    Can't you see something's missing?
    You forget where the heart is

    Take you away from that empty apartment
    You stay and forget where the heart is
    Someday if ever you love me you'd say it's okay

    Waking up from this nightmare
    How's your life, what's it like there?
    Is it all what you want it to be?
    Does it hurt when you think about me?
    And how broken my heart is

    Take you away from that empty apartment
    You stay and forget where the heart is
    Someday if ever you love me you'd say it's okay

    It's okay to be angry and never let go
    It only gets harder the more that you know
    When you get lonely if no one's around
    You know that I'll catch you when you're falling down
    We came together but you left alone
    And I know how it feels to walk out on your own
    Maybe someday I will see you again
    And you'll look me in my eyes and call me your friend

    Take you away from that empty apartment
    You stay and forget where the heart is
    Someday if ever you love me you'd say its okay
    It's okay

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    Re: a lighter poem from me.

    i prefer the darker poems, love poems aren't as interesting to me.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    Re: a lighter poem from me.

    perhaps this one was aimed at the female audience.lol

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    Re: a lighter poem from me.

    Quote Originally Posted by fayt lingod View Post
    i prefer the darker poems, love poems aren't as interesting to me.
    amigo come on give her a credit she actually made a magnifico trabajo.

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    Re: a lighter poem from me.

    Quote Originally Posted by Baal View Post
    amigo come on give her a credit she actually made a magnifico trabajo.
    grrrr,im a guy.lol
    thanx,though.

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    Re: a lighter poem from me.

    Quote Originally Posted by setsuna mudo1617 View Post
    grrrr,im a guy.lol
    thanx,though.
    o sorry amigo
    mi mal.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: a lighter poem from me.

    np,here is a dark poem for you guys/girls.lol

    So now your pictures worth a thousand words,
    you meant so much to me it hurts.
    This tattoo on my wrist,
    this feeling cant be missed.
    You meant so much to make things worse.

    Get ready for the impact,
    I promise you won't feel a thing tonight.
    Get ready for the angels
    to come and take away your pain and sight
    at the moment of passing.

    I know that memories never die.
    So this is my angel
    and I know my scars won't heal tonight
    ‘cause they’re paid for, paid for.


    Get ready for the ending,
    I promise you won't feel the earth tonight.
    And this is for the mending,
    to heal the hearts of the friends you left alive
    at the moment of passing.

    I know that memories never die.
    So this is my angel
    and I know my scars won't heal tonight
    ‘cause they’re paid for, paid for.


    This is my tribute to your life.

    In this moment,
    this violent careless moment
    I make believe that you’re still here. I'll see you out tonight.
    I hold you close and hold you dear, keep you by my side.

    Forever and a lifetime,
    just a blink and you’re gone. I wish you’d stay.
    And this is for you moment,
    I finally get to say goodbye the right way,
    while everyone’s listening.

    I know that memories never die.
    So this is my angel
    and I know my scars wont heal tonight
    ‘cause they’re paid for, paid for.

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    Re: a lighter poem from me.

    Quote Originally Posted by setsuna mudo1617 View Post
    np,here is a dark poem for you guys/girls.lol

    So now your pictures worth a thousand words,
    you meant so much to me it hurts.
    This tattoo on my wrist,
    this feeling cant be missed.
    You meant so much to make things worse.

    Get ready for the impact,
    I promise you won't feel a thing tonight.
    Get ready for the angels
    to come and take away your pain and sight
    at the moment of passing.

    I know that memories never die.
    So this is my angel
    and I know my scars won't heal tonight
    ‘cause they’re paid for, paid for.


    Get ready for the ending,
    I promise you won't feel the earth tonight.
    And this is for the mending,
    to heal the hearts of the friends you left alive
    at the moment of passing.

    I know that memories never die.
    So this is my angel
    and I know my scars won't heal tonight
    ‘cause they’re paid for, paid for.


    This is my tribute to your life.

    In this moment,
    this violent careless moment
    I make believe that you’re still here. I'll see you out tonight.
    I hold you close and hold you dear, keep you by my side.

    Forever and a lifetime,
    just a blink and you’re gone. I wish you’d stay.
    And this is for you moment,
    I finally get to say goodbye the right way,
    while everyone’s listening.

    I know that memories never die.
    So this is my angel
    and I know my scars wont heal tonight
    ‘cause they’re paid for, paid for.
    noo thats what im talking about amgo u should make it apart from this poem cuz it might get closed down u dont want such good work go to waste, no?



    perdoname michelle!

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