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    a lighter side to me

    wishing
    ive wished on a thousand stars
    ive wished so many, but never got what i wished for
    a wish left unchecked, by the gods above
    after awhile my wishing days left me

    i wished on shooting stars, and wishing wells and more
    the wish of my wishs....
    i never could see

    as my life continued on, my wishing became less.
    and then i stopped wishing.
    deep sorrow and depression soon took over.

    until that day that i came here.
    the day that i met someone similar to me.
    the wishing that i had stopped came back to me.
    oh how i wished it could be.

    so i wrote a poem, for her to see.
    i can only hope that this wish is to be.



    double poem.....

    life changes
    life changes in so many ways
    i used to cry and hide away my emotions
    i used to fear change and love.
    but life changes so much and so do the people you meet


    as ive progressed through this life many people have been there
    many have hurt and many have ran.
    very few have stood with me, but those that have,
    have seen what i am, seen what i can do.
    life changes us all, and some for the better

    life has changed me, it has granted me freindship
    it has granted me love.
    i cherish it all for now and forever
    life changes so i embrace it

    my freinds and my love embrace it with me
    life changes so rapidly so lets take it and spend it together
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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    Re: a lighter side to me

    so no one likes my lighter stuff? well thats not what i was expecting but i guess then ill have to stick with my darkside then
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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    Re: a lighter side to me

    Quote Originally Posted by god of death View Post
    wishing
    ive wished on a thousand stars
    ive wished so many, but never got what i wished for
    a wish left unchecked, by the gods above
    after awhile my wishing days left me

    i wished on shooting stars, and wishing wells and more
    the wish of my wishs....
    i never could see

    as my life continued on, my wishing became less.
    and then i stopped wishing.
    deep sorrow and depression soon took over.

    until that day that i came here.
    the day that i met someone similar to me.
    the wishing that i had stopped came back to me.
    oh how i wished it could be.

    so i wrote a poem, for her to see.
    i can only hope that this wish is to be.



    double poem.....

    life changes
    life changes in so many ways
    i used to cry and hide away my emotions
    i used to fear change and love.
    but life changes so much and so do the people you meet


    as ive progressed through this life many people have been there
    many have hurt and many have ran.
    very few have stood with me, but those that have,
    have seen what i am, seen what i can do.
    life changes us all, and some for the better

    life has changed me, it has granted me freindship
    it has granted me love.
    i cherish it all for now and forever
    life changes so i embrace it

    my freinds and my love embrace it with me
    life changes so rapidly so lets take it and spend it together
    Lol don't be silly
    I like it

    whishing is hopefull
    it starts off looking a lil dark
    but in the end you see a lil light =)
    its sweet

    life changes - thats so true and its so much better when you have people to change with =)

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    Re: a lighter side to me

    Quote Originally Posted by god of death View Post
    so no one likes my lighter stuff? well thats not what i was expecting but i guess then ill have to stick with my darkside then
    Do not be so impatient. It takes time for others to view poems. Also, you shouldn't write a certain way because it's what you think attracts people. You should write the way you like, and what you feel in that moment. Not what you think others are expecting from you. That way, it sounds more realistic. This poem for example. I really liked it. It sounds like it was something you were thinking, so you posted it here. I like it. Nice job.

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    Re: a lighter side to me

    well that first one was something i was thinking about someone......
    i do write lighter ones but not to often.
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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    Re: a lighter side to me

    I like your ppoems and you should be paitient I waited a couple of hours once before I got a respnse before. But it was a good poem. You have good talent.Hope to see more.

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    Re: a lighter side to me

    twitches* eh thanks! but i think i waited a while for that but thanks for the complement, im always around here somewhere... guess i better make a few more poems for you all!
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
    http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
    this is my site come and see me there sometime!

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