+ Reply to Thread
Results 1 to 6 of 6

Thread: Light's Fall, Darkness' Stand

  1. Aug 09, 2006 04:32 PM #1
    N.Y._Soulja
    N.Y._Soulja is offline
    Devoted Otaku N.Y._Soulja may be famous one day N.Y._Soulja may be famous one day N.Y._Soulja's Avatar
    Join Date
    May 2005
    Location
    Miami
    Posts
    603
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Light's Fall, Darkness' Stand

    There's No sunshine left
    the moon shines her beautiful light
    the sun is gone, what a great theft,
    but his shine was an amiable sight.

    The darkness reigns all,
    and the sun has been forgotten,
    this is light's great fall,
    and the moon will be loved like my begotten.
    Darkness falls beneath us,
    and this is how life is just.

    She is full of blood
    just like the red sun
    War!
    War!
    War!
    Its all so terribly fun
    You should stop talking about your dreams, and start making them.

    http://kuv319.tumblr.com/
    There is something so human in the desire to never give up, while at the same time, never giving it your all?
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  2. Aug 09, 2006 04:39 PM #2
    HieisLove
    HieisLove is offline
    ♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·. HieisLove may be famous one day HieisLove may be famous one day HieisLove's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2006
    Location
    In my own world..
    Posts
    903
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post

    Re: Light's Fall, Darkness' Stand

    Ohhh I like it!! Keep it up!
    ♥ (¯'·._.·[ＧＥＩＳＨＡ ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  3. Aug 10, 2006 12:28 AM #3
    Shinigami's_Angel
    Shinigami's_Angel is offline
    Sorrow's Angel Shinigami's_Angel may be famous one day Shinigami's_Angel may be famous one day Shinigami's_Angel's Avatar
    Join Date
    Mar 2006
    Location
    Hidding Under The Covers hehe XD
    Posts
    688
    Thanks
    40
    Thanked 9 Times in 8 Posts

    Re: Light's Fall, Darkness' Stand

    Kool,I liked it N.Y._Soulja Awesome job
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  4. Aug 10, 2006 12:35 AM #4
    elie26
    elie26 is offline
    Elie Jelly elie26 may be famous one day elie26 may be famous one day elie26's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2006
    Location
    Hell is an understatement
    Posts
    593
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post

    Re: Light's Fall, Darkness' Stand

    >_>

    <_<

    I don't like posting twice T.T But since I'm such a nice friend*cough* XD
    This poem sounded very much alike with your previous one, the last phrase also did the same effect- weirdness, and I couldn't get with the "war" part Maybe I'm just too dumb...but yeah...
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  5. Aug 10, 2006 12:59 AM #5
    tupacs_wifey
    tupacs_wifey is offline
    Otaku tupacs_wifey may be famous one day tupacs_wifey may be famous one day tupacs_wifey's Avatar
    Join Date
    Apr 2006
    Location
    In My own heart
    Posts
    440
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Light's Fall, Darkness' Stand

    beatiful....go war!!!!!!!!!!

    HolderOfThe    DarkChalice's LiL sis
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
  6. Aug 10, 2006 11:09 AM #6
    forever a dreamer
    forever a dreamer is offline
    Otaku forever a dreamer may be famous one day forever a dreamer may be famous one day forever a dreamer's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2006
    Location
    In my little imaginary world
    Posts
    102
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Re: Light's Fall, Darkness' Stand

    i really liked it- keep it up! hope to read more soon
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote
+ Reply to Thread
« Previous Thread | Next Thread »

Similar Threads

  1. Crying Darkness
    By Shinigami's_Angel in forum Poems
    Replies: 10
    Last Post: Jul 19, 2006, 04:00 PM
  2. Greater Lights
    By Jet Black in forum Poems
    Replies: 7
    Last Post: May 18, 2006, 01:29 PM
  3. " Darkness " A Simple short poem :)
    By viper11025 in forum Poems
    Replies: 3
    Last Post: May 17, 2006, 01:39 PM
  4. Why Do We Fall In Love?
    By Manga artist in forum The Thread Vault
    Replies: 40
    Last Post: Feb 14, 2006, 02:08 PM

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts

Forum Rules