Thread: Like a Bad star I'm falling....

dam this is good. I love the idea of u wanting ppl to dream of u while u're taking down with u into the darkness. Love it, keep it up.

This poem is great. I'm an insom.... oh.. I think a better word 2 use is nocturnal, lol. ^_^ . I love the way that it is set out and most of all I can actually relate to it.

I look forward 2 reading more.

this is so cool... and you never give your poems a title? ooh, awesome... I definitely love it... your poem is one of a kind... never seen anything like it before... you chose a hard theme, but you did it well... btw, nice heading.... oh, and I have sleeping problems, too...

Poems that twist my heart are the best.
Keep it up

Originally Posted by Reese

This poem is great. I'm an insom.... oh.. I think a better word 2 use is nocturnal, lol. ^_^ . I love the way that it is set out and most of all I can actually relate to it.

I look forward 2 reading more.

Its hard for me to say nocturnal. And i don't feel its descriptive in poetry, but using it instead of insom is alright. More vapirish though.

@ Sachiko- thank you for saying its one of a kind. Makes me feel special!

That was great I hope there is more if so let me know.

i enjoyed reading that poem!! but i do agree with Jade about you staying in your room writing, which to me was in your diary. I didn't like that start it just felt like it trailed off a bit.

But it was still a great poem!!