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    Re: Like a Bad star I'm falling....

    NOOOOOOOOOOO! You can't quit! I have to quit if your going to quit, *bows to greatness somemore*! Thank you Trung though!

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    Re: Like a Bad star I'm falling....

    dam this is good. I love the idea of u wanting ppl to dream of u while u're taking down with u into the darkness. Love it, keep it up.

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    This poem is great. I'm an insom.... oh.. I think a better word 2 use is nocturnal, lol. ^_^ . I love the way that it is set out and most of all I can actually relate to it.

    I look forward 2 reading more.

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    this is so cool... and you never give your poems a title? ooh, awesome... I definitely love it... your poem is one of a kind... never seen anything like it before... you chose a hard theme, but you did it well... btw, nice heading.... oh, and I have sleeping problems, too...

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    Re: Like a Bad star I'm falling....

    Poems that twist my heart are the best.
    Keep it up

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    Re: Like a Bad star I'm falling....

    Quote Originally Posted by Reese
    This poem is great. I'm an insom.... oh.. I think a better word 2 use is nocturnal, lol. ^_^ . I love the way that it is set out and most of all I can actually relate to it.

    I look forward 2 reading more.
    Its hard for me to say nocturnal. And i don't feel its descriptive in poetry, but using it instead of insom is alright. More vapirish though.

    @ Sachiko- thank you for saying its one of a kind. Makes me feel special!

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    Re: Like a Bad star I'm falling....

    That was great I hope there is more if so let me know.

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    Re: Like a Bad star I'm falling....

    i enjoyed reading that poem!! but i do agree with Jade about you staying in your room writing, which to me was in your diary. I didn't like that start it just felt like it trailed off a bit.

    But it was still a great poem!!
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