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    Like the Flower, Jasmine but deadly

    I was warrior wandering through the land,
    Fighting those would oppose me,
    Those would hurt the innocent.
    Yet women sought after me,
    Wanting me to protect them,
    But I was searching for someone else.

    Someone who could fight,
    A strong, wilful woman.
    One could talk back and had a spine,
    Who could hold a sword and defend herself.
    Night after night I wandered doing odd jobs,
    Then saw her, warrior like myself.
    She was held beauty like no other women i saw,
    She held herself well,
    Not afraid to show her weapons she carried,
    Not afraid to show her legs off.

    My mind wandered off,
    My eyes watching her movements.
    She was refined.
    My eyes watched her body,
    However toned muscles moved.
    I realise I left my mouth open and I shut it,
    I looked back at her and she winked at her.
    She knew that I was looking at her,
    I smiled and walked over to talk to her.

    We were both alike,
    Warriors of different styles,
    Wanderers of the land,
    We talked like we knew each other for eons.
    I felt like we connected,
    It was as if we were looking for the missing parts of our lives.

    Soon our night was interrupt by rude gentlemen,
    Claiming that we had damage their property and wanted pay.
    Unfortunately, neither She or I had money to pay them,
    But we did however make quite a scene,
    We fought the gang members like comrades of old.
    We soon ran away under the nightsky,
    Laughing we soon stopped and found we were holding hands.
    I saw her blushed, something I thought would never happen.
    I soon held her face, feeling her smooth cheek.
    Her dark eyes were beautiful to me,
    I came close to her kissed her,
    Feeling her moist lip kissing back.
    We were soon to be in ignorant bliss,
    Only caring about each other.

    well....it's bin quite awhile since i wrote a poem like this. Hope u enjoy it and plz comment.
    Last edited by Blade X; May 26, 2006 at 11:55 AM.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Like the Flower, Jasmine but deadly

    wow thats realy good

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    Re: Like the Flower, Jasmine but deadly

    this poem is a lil dark don't you think blade, lol it was anice poem man, keep it up.

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    Re: Like the Flower, Jasmine but deadly

    wow this one must have really bin bad for it to get only 2 replies.....*sighs*....looks like i havent got flow....

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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