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    listen............

    ok

    firends r the only thing we can rly depend on this world
    family is the same but u can nevr lose them
    the strenght to move on
    the strenght to live on

    to fight for what is right

    oh can u hear it
    it's calling you
    listen closly to it
    it says
    don't leave me
    come with me

    i will show u the way!

    ok what do u think ?
    oh this is for my friend Diablojac!
    and evryone else i know too but too many names to say.(lasura u rock too)
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    Re: listen............

    Great poem!!!! I loved it!!!! Really! It was just simply amazing! And I loved how it's for other people as well so YEAH!!!! GO GO GO YOU!!!!! I hope to see more of your work!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    this is a great poem i liked it alot it si really good

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    Re: listen............

    love the way you
    worded this girl
    you did a great job with this
    keep them coming okay

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    Your so good its almost annoying.This is so good.Great job!

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    Thank You Ryoma... ^^ It's nice to hear that I rock... ^^

    The poem is perfect I think, it's so lovely... and a lill dark still with lots of light- perfect combination!!!! Love it!!!

    This poem really is great!!!
    Nice work Ryoma, I really enjoyed reading this poem!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: listen............

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Thank You Ryoma... ^^ It's nice to hear that I rock... ^^

    The poem is perfect I think, it's so lovely... and a lill dark still with lots of light- perfect combination!!!! Love it!!!

    This poem really is great!!!
    Nice work Ryoma, I really enjoyed reading this poem!!!
    thanks lasura! yea i liked it too. it was kind of hard but i think and ok job on it. i was trying to make it in a view of darkness which turned into a brightness. i guess it worked! thanks for ur wonderful comments they mean soo much to me (bows)
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    I like it!!!! i never thought of writting about that but i'm glad you did... i love it^^ write some more!

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