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    Listen for her scream

    A crystal tear
    A scream no one will hear
    Watch her fall
    This is the end

    Possessed with hate
    Help came just a little too late
    She reached for love
    Against her will

    The walls closed in
    Wishing for ways it could've been
    Her breathe passed her lips
    A scream no one could hear

    From the roof top she fell
    She never left her shell
    A lie she lived for years
    Her heart died from within

    Eager eyes watched in horror
    Her body hit the floor
    No one heard the words said
    "Love me until the end"

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    Re: Listen for her scream

    Good poem. I stink at poems myself.( not saying that you do. you rock at making poems! )

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    Re: Listen for her scream

    That is a touching poem, where'd you get, did you make it? I really like it.

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    Re: Listen for her scream

    good poem sashycat, keep it up.

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    Re: Listen for her scream

    A little poem to read
    But a long time to keep
    Maybe I should say forever is not enough
    For me to let you sleep.....

    A very nice poem.....

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    Re: Listen for her scream

    wooooow. Answering a poem with another poem. Shweet. Anyways, good poem. No offense but to me all of the words kinda poured together. I liked it but it all sounded too much alike. Good, though.

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    Re: Listen for her scream

    A suicide poem......to believe tht love has died in her heart n can nvr love again. it is a sad thing to see. To die because she believes the world is nothing but a cold world. Such a sad poem yet it is one to always bear in mind.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Listen for her scream

    oh tis is nc...real nc...i disagree with red_wings coz when u write a poem...u can't juz write it today then leave it for tommorow...poems r made in a moment....so yea...it really had the flow of it...i like it really much

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