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Reply With QuoteGood poem. I stink at poems myself.( not saying that you do. you rock at making poems! )
A crystal tear
A scream no one will hear
Watch her fall
This is the end
Possessed with hate
Help came just a little too late
She reached for love
Against her will
The walls closed in
Wishing for ways it could've been
Her breathe passed her lips
A scream no one could hear
From the roof top she fell
She never left her shell
A lie she lived for years
Her heart died from within
Eager eyes watched in horror
Her body hit the floor
No one heard the words said
"Love me until the end"
Good poem. I stink at poems myself.( not saying that you do. you rock at making poems! )
Got bored on Photoshop so I did this xD
That is a touching poem, where'd you get, did you make it? I really like it.
good poem sashycat, keep it up.
A little poem to read
But a long time to keep
Maybe I should say forever is not enough
For me to let you sleep.....
A very nice poem.....
wooooow. Answering a poem with another poem. Shweet. Anyways, good poem. No offense but to me all of the words kinda poured together. I liked it but it all sounded too much alike.Good, though.
A suicide poem......to believe tht love has died in her heart n can nvr love again. it is a sad thing to see. To die because she believes the world is nothing but a cold world. Such a sad poem yet it is one to always bear in mind.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
oh tis is nc...real nc...i disagree with red_wings coz when u write a poem...u can't juz write it today then leave it for tommorow...poems r made in a moment....so yea...it really had the flow of it...i like it really much
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