I liked this... As I read it, it seemed like all the words and thoughts just poured into my mind. It was written like that too, no big breaks and it started off heavey and just kind of trickles to its end.... So its just like spilling words. Which worked here... Like a pouring out of emotion.
I wonder what a chain of a**holes would look like? .... yeah... that was uncalled for, yet I could not resist.when you have the chance soon coming,
to break the chain of assholes before.