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    Little white


    A fluffy white coat
    Whimpers softly and helplessly
    Shivering and crawling
    The gestures of those through infancy.

    Widened eyes staring blankly,
    It yelped and crawled again.
    In a small world of its
    A little basket with fabric lain.

    What does it wish for?
    What does it look for?
    Will fate stare upon it like its mother’s silky fur?
    What is in store for it?

    It matters not
    Still it whimpers of cold
    Still it yelps for attention
    It is little and it is bold.

    Ready to experience
    Ready to explore.
    The little one sets out
    Starving for more

    As it is petted and cared
    It barks happily.
    A little home
    For a little silly.

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    Re: Little white

    like ,wow ...that was great! ^_^ ....that inspired me =D ...now i think Im goin to write poem on a dog ..lol ..nyc work !XD

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    Re: Little white

    I hear of a place that is made of gold,
    a place where we shall never grow old,
    But one answer I have not heard at all,
    will there be paw prints from my little dog?
    He promised us joy right from the start,
    I just wonder if she'll be a part.
    So as I sit here and dream of the day,
    I wonder if heaven she will stay?
    When your walking down with the saints of old
    take a glimpse of that new road and if there you shall see,
    Maybe a pawprint just for me.

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    Re: Little white

    Wow.. a lovely response.. breath taking really... but I wonder what may be the hidden message behind this lovely poem...

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    Re: Little white

    *smiles slightly* your a smart guy. you'll figure it out eventually.
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    Re: Little white

    Its about how that there are... heaven for doggies.. so far I could see.. hmm the author is trying to picture what happens to the "lost" doggy.. and whether it will see heaven. The remnants of the paw would mean memories the doggy left behind

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    Re: Little white

    your close to the heaven part but it was more asking the heavens to locate the doggy and the heaven's response to that plea would be the prints that lead you off the road. however you love your doggy enough to do whatever it takes to see it again. The road is beautiful, so beautiful in fact that creates a dreaming state in your mind and in the end the final pawprint leads you to your doggy.
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    Re: Little white

    How could a poem about a doggie...BE SO FANTASTIC????!!! *sobs*

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