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Why do we breath,
Why do we leave?
What makes us bend,
What makes us break?
Why do we live,
Why are we here?
What do we do,
What makes us free?
Why do we breath,
Why do we leave?
What makes us happy,
What makes us sad?
Why do we bend,
Why do we break?
Why do we live,
What is our purpose?
What makes us glad,
What makes us mad?
Why do we breath,
Why do we leave.
This poem is just a bunch of questions asked in a row.
If there were some type of answer that can be interpreted at the end of the poem, it would have made it all the more better.
This time I have to agree with White Wolf... there are really too much questions... But I understand what you're trying to do- you're trying to make us think. It's good... but you should continue it with answers of some kind. ^^
Yes, continue it... now when you've made us think, give YOUR answers ^^
well i dont think i was trying to make it into a poem. but thank you guys for your input. i appreciate it.