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    I once had a life that I loved to live but it was taken away from me,
    My parents died in a car crash but I was saved...
    but I don't know how but till I opened my eyes
    my mother was holding me protecting me and my
    father made an opening for me to go.

    I didn't want to but they forced me to go,
    so I did they told me not to look back so
    I didn't,
    I just keeped on running,
    With tears flowing down my face.
    that is when I lost meaning in life.

    I wish that never happened,
    I wish it was just an nightmare,
    I wish it was just a lie....
    but I know it really happened.

    I know that I would do the same,
    I love my perants so much
    that I will keep living this misery of a life
    so I know I'm strong to keep on living.
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    Re: living

    Ok... Im finally going to comment on this. (I read it, and I choke up, then I go back to read it again, this is the first time I've gathered the strength to address this)

    Assuming this is true... I feel for you so much. And Im glad that you keep on living, despite your hardships. Thats what they wanted for you. But not to live in misery.

    This poem pulled out such emotions for me. I almost died in a car accident last October... my baby was in the car, and it was MY fault.

    Reading this poem reminded me of how it felt to wake up from that... I cried for you when I read this... I cried for my son too.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: living

    *salutes to peach* good effort ^^

    Hmmm *sighs* they gave u a chance to live... use it wisely and fully... enjoy all the time u had... and remember their sacrifice ^^ good poem..

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