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    Living in lie...

    On that day
    you asked a simple question from me --
    The simple question, that could --
    and would change everything.

    You asked me again,
    and yet I stayed quiet --

    For the third time you asked,
    the same question...
    Begging me for an answer.

    I looked into your eyes --
    and said that small word..."Yes"

    Untill that moment
    I had lied to you..
    So long I had lied,
    that I could no more--
    no more keep that secret.

    I ask you for forgiveness--
    no I beg you.

    I had to keep that secret,
    I had to lie...
    All those years, I lied,
    just to ensure, that we could
    remain as friends.

    But now...I had to tell,
    the true feeling I had--
    had towards you--

    You asked, do you love me--
    Do you really want to marry me--
    "Yes I do...I really really do, Tanja"


    Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...

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    Re: Living in lie...

    that is so pretty i love it

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    Re: Living in lie...

    2 thumbs up!!!!! great work


    thank u SasuraiHell
    go -=NOOBZ=- clan!

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    Re: Living in lie...

    i really like it! two thumbs way up!
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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    Re: Living in lie...

    nice happy sweet poem. like it much.*snaps*

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    Re: Living in lie...

    I can tell that it's based on a real life experiece ^^
    Well, I really hope you and ur cousin can be together...and I'm wondering bout her reaction when u answered o_O but yeah..
    It was a real sweet poem Keep it up.

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    Re: Living in lie...

    Elie, thanks for great valuation...really nice to hear it from the best poet of AO.

    But what comes to your comment about "real life expirence" I
    won't give comments about that, maybe it is...maybe not ^_^


    Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...

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    Re: Living in lie...

    Your style is apparent, but I would love to see you make it harder for me to read the poem...hide the meaning a bit deeper, lol. Great work buddy. Keep it up.

    o~Piggy-san~o

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