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Reply With Quotethat is so pretty i love it
On that day
you asked a simple question from me --
The simple question, that could --
and would change everything.
You asked me again,
and yet I stayed quiet --
For the third time you asked,
the same question...
Begging me for an answer.
I looked into your eyes --
and said that small word..."Yes"
Untill that moment
I had lied to you..
So long I had lied,
that I could no more--
no more keep that secret.
I ask you for forgiveness--
no I beg you.
I had to keep that secret,
I had to lie...
All those years, I lied,
just to ensure, that we could
remain as friends.
But now...I had to tell,
the true feeling I had--
had towards you--
You asked, do you love me--
Do you really want to marry me--
"Yes I do...I really really do, Tanja"
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
that is so pretty i love it
HolderOfTheDarkChalice's LiL sis
2 thumbs up!!!!! great work
thank u SasuraiHell
go -=NOOBZ=- clan!
i really like it! two thumbs way up!
You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.
Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!
nice happy sweet poem. like it much.*snaps*
Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen
I can tell that it's based on a real life experiece ^^
Well, I really hope you and ur cousin can be together...and I'm wondering bout her reaction when u answered o_O but yeah..
It was a real sweet poemKeep it up.
Elie, thanks for great valuation...really nice to hear it from the best poet of AO.
But what comes to your comment about "real life expirence" I
won't give comments about that, maybe it is...maybe not ^_^
Love hurts...trust me I know, I really do...
Your style is apparent, but I would love to see you make it harder for me to read the poem...hide the meaning a bit deeper, lol. Great work buddy. Keep it up.
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