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    Lone

    wrote for a someone who is drawing me a picture

    a lone wolf
    all alone
    wandering slyishly

    kicked out of his pack
    to survive on his own
    until he finds another.

    another that will love him
    and bring him into her family
    to gain acceptance from the others

    there he will care for
    and take care of his pack
    and become alpha male.




    I just barely wrote it. if you have any advice, critqueing? please say so lol
    thank you

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    Re: Lone

    Great poem! I give it a Two thumbs up!!! I loved it cause it just reminds me of me a bit so YEAH! I hope to see more of your great work!
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