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    The Lone Wolf of Mibu

    I was part of the most fierce group,
    We were the Wolves of Mibu.
    Evil feared us as we destory it,
    Our justice is rigid and absolute,
    We protected the Japan.
    We soon died as we grew old,
    But I remain strong,
    Following my code:
    Aku, Soku, Zan.

    We fought like demons,
    Yet there was a shadow demon,
    Who could surpass the Shinsen gumi.
    I heard and crave to fight him,
    Battousai the manslayer.
    The demon who struck fear into everyone.
    But I want to fight him,
    I was the strongest of Wolves of Mibu,
    I wanted to slay the man-slayer.

    The night stank of blood and death
    As I finally saw him,
    It was as they say,
    He had cold eyes like mine,
    His voice, annoyed as though we were bugs.
    But I would make him acknowledge me,
    Acknowlegde that I will kill him.
    Aku, Soku, Zan.
    That is my Justice, my strength.
    As I charged into battle,
    That was my hour of Judgement.

    Enjoy ppl, hope u guys like it. BTW Aku, Soku, Zan means Evil, Swift, Kill.
    Last edited by Blade X; May 04, 2006 at 12:53 PM.

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    Re: The Lone Wolf of Mibu

    A vicious poem Vicious! I like it. Keep up the good work blade.

    o~Piggy-san~o

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    Re: The Lone Wolf of Mibu

    tbh, these kinda poems doesnt really suit me...maybe coz im a girl but yea...it's cool....so great work there.

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    Re: The Lone Wolf of Mibu

    mmmmmmm looks like this poem hast gotten a lot of views or comments....... Looks like it's be the drawing board for new poetry

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: The Lone Wolf of Mibu

    nice poem about wolves and stuff man. good work blade, keep it up.

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    Re: The Lone Wolf of Mibu

    Definatly a lot of emotion in there. It is good, just not really my style. But it is original and even though it dosn't rhyme (I Love rhyming poems XD) I still think it is great! And I didn't notice a single spelling mistake! >.< But then again I can't really spell myself so...

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    Re: The Lone Wolf of Mibu

    Hey Blade yet another awsome poem man!

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    Re: The Lone Wolf of Mibu

    i knew it had problems in it. anyways, thx for the corrections kedar.

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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