Awww I like it!!! I give it a *drum roll* 10!!
Why i gave all trust
i told u i loved u
u just live me with out a word
steal evrything i had
then u ask if we can be one again
i just dont want u back''
all those kisses can give good times
but it also gave a bad sign
that u were cheating my mind
u were a fantasy that anyone will dreamed
but it wasnt the reality that i've seen
i cant wait to be back as a loner
i cant wait to be my own owner
now i can rest my feelins with out
u
doing mindless tricks
that makes my mind sick
and paralized like a plain stick
now loneless is my only friend
my only sin...
perdoname michelle!
Awww I like it!!! I give it a *drum roll* 10!!
♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
wow, i love it. It's great! I give a 10 too lol
"I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."
im glad atleast u to like it.. ^^
perdoname michelle!
Of course I'll like itYou write awesome stuff
♥ (¯'·._.·[GEISHA ゲイシャ]·._.·'¯) ♥
doing mindless tricks
that makes my mind sick
and paralized like a plain stick
now loneless is my only friend
my only sin...
i liked this part people do this
all the time and dont care who they hurt
it reminds me of some freinds a few years ago
who played this game and got burned in the end.
awesome poem here i liked it alot
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
wow, that was pretty ultra right there ^_^ i felt ur pain, very nice
*claps till hands bleed * spectacuala great poem i like it
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