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    '' Loneless''

    Why i gave all trust
    i told u i loved u
    u just live me with out a word
    steal evrything i had
    then u ask if we can be one again
    i just dont want u back''
    all those kisses can give good times
    but it also gave a bad sign
    that u were cheating my mind
    u were a fantasy that anyone will dreamed
    but it wasnt the reality that i've seen
    i cant wait to be back as a loner
    i cant wait to be my own owner
    now i can rest my feelins with out
    u
    doing mindless tricks
    that makes my mind sick
    and paralized like a plain stick
    now loneless is my only friend
    my only sin...



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: '' Loneless''

    Awww I like it!!! I give it a *drum roll* 10!!
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    Re: '' Loneless''

    wow, i love it. It's great! I give a 10 too lol
    "I love you with all my heart that I can't explain how much in words."

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    Re: '' Loneless''

    im glad atleast u to like it.. ^^



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: '' Loneless''

    Of course I'll like it You write awesome stuff
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    Re: '' Loneless''

    doing mindless tricks
    that makes my mind sick
    and paralized like a plain stick
    now loneless is my only friend
    my only sin...

    i liked this part people do this
    all the time and dont care who they hurt
    it reminds me of some freinds a few years ago
    who played this game and got burned in the end.
    awesome poem here i liked it alot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: '' Loneless''

    wow, that was pretty ultra right there ^_^ i felt ur pain, very nice


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    Re: '' Loneless''

    *claps till hands bleed * spectacuala great poem i like it

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