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    Lonely

    Lonely...
    crying so much I can't see...
    full of so much despairity....
    pained so much in me....

    lonely....
    so lonely...

    hard to get through my pain....
    everywhere I look is the same....
    happiness in others the name....
    making me feel so insane....

    crying my tears to the floor....
    not wanting to take all of this anymore....
    why God why am I so sore....?
    I just wanted love galore....

    now I will pain daily....
    cause i can't marry my loving baby....
    and maybe just maybe....
    i can no longer hurt freely....

    i want relief from all of this,
    and maybe again a deep loving kiss....

    will i gain this kiss....
    or am i never to gain anymore bliss....?



    Justin

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Lonely

    sad but very good poem love the a,a,b,b pattern in the poem also that it rhymes keep up the good work and can't wait to hear to more

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    Re: Lonely

    Such a sad poem... you've put such emotions in it, such pain... It's really a great work you've done here...
    I enjoyed reading this and really will be looking forward to see more from you...

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    Re: Lonely

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Such a sad poem... you've put such emotions in it, such pain... It's really a great work you've done here...
    I enjoyed reading this and really will be looking forward to see more from you...
    (( but i love it. good job anyway, i hope i can read more poems ...

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    Re: Lonely

    wow what a sad peom but I loved it! You are a very good poem writer because you describe your poems well! Hope to see more! *~meow~*



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    Re: Lonely

    great work awesome poem.WOOHOO GO GO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!so sad but i know ur not lonely very well discribed poem.
    ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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